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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 18:23 EDT
Comment/Review:
Beautiful. Well done. Loved it. Give us more.
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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 11:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Did you have Inu finally find a Prozac/Zoloft stash? He seems pretty darn happy and it's fun to read. And my most sincere thanks for not only putting up Eight chapters (short ones, but so what), you have obviously tried a spell-check option! Yay! Hooray for you and your spell-checking self! There are some errors but after the glut of horrific spelling/grammar/ack! stories that I've been paroozing lately, this is a happy find. It's cute and fluffy and a bit silly, and I hope you continue it because it's like a banana split for my brain. Silly, fluffy and fun! Thank you! :)
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Reviewed By: sweetdog_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 11:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was the right amount of comedy and romance I would like to know more about what happens between them pleasle write soon
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Reviewed By: smich16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 04:39 EDT
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im really into this story its quite funny. update soon!
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Reviewed By: akajazzy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 00:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! it's pretty good so far. plz update soon. (is Inuyasha going to make u w/ Kagome in the next chapter???)
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