Reviewed By: MHTorringjan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, most of the riffs on the fic were borderline author flames. Some of the riffs were pretty good, I have to admit. You might want to try varying your riffs a bit. I mean, there were four or five different riffs of them groaning, "Mary sue" or some variation thereof. In such a short fic, those sorts of riffs get old kind of fast. Overall, it wasn't too bad, but you might want to work on it a bit more. |
