| "Thrown Away" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 21:40 CST
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OH! Great fic!
You are right. The whole idea is a very overused one but your version of it is very original and your writing is great.
I hope you update soon. PLEASE update soon. ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Rae George On: October 03, 2002 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay.
Cool.
Very nice.
Needs more Veggie. Always more Veggie. |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin On: July 24, 2002 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, this is actually the first fic I've read where Vegeta had a brother...I think everyone thinks its so obvious an option that everyone else must have used it...
In truth you've got a great story going here, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Gonna put you on my fav's list so I get beeped when you update... so make it soon already.
Jada |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2002 16:29 CDT
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Still in awe... |
Reviewed By: Rae George On: July 18, 2002 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so, I'm at Veronica's house at the moment and she's muttering something about her paycheck and taxes... ANYhow, I'm just ignoring her because she's being hebephrenic at the moment. Seeing as how we're about to go watch The Breakfast Club (it is about 2 am right now) and try to stay awake till five am, so I'll make this short and (probably not very) sweet. Ready? Ready!
Major testosterone spill, man. They're gonna be mopping that stuff up with the JUMBO sized sponges.
Whatever-the-hell-his-name-is-now is being a schmuck.
Why do all the long lost relatives who come to visit Veggie yell at him for banging an alien? Look at what happened! We got TRUNKS out of that arrangement! Worth it? I THINK SO!
What else, hmmm? I forget. That's it for now. Movie time. I'll yell at you some more later. Hehehe. ;-) |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 01:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
YYYYYEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH......
Please read my review on ffn for further comments! Thank you for shopping at Price Chopper! We shall now return you to your regularly scheduled fanfiction! |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2002 12:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME YOU HAD UPDATED?????????
THIS ROCKS!!!!!!!!
Ooooooh, what's he gonna do when he realizes Veggie's back??? Shh! Don't tell me! |
Reviewed By: SaiyaSith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2002 11:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this ficcie! Whoo-boy...I sure do hope he finds Goku first. Vegeta wouldn't necessarily be the best one to greet him. Heh. I'd be surprised if he didn't befriend Yamucha during his trolling... wouldn't -that- be an interesting friendship! heh!
Great story, another awesome chapter...
C'ya in the next chappy... |
Reviewed By: Trunks' Saiyajin Princess On: July 10, 2002 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a great fic! & congrats on your test scores; thats awesome! guess im not so smart, i dunno what u did to veggie, 'cept that he wouldnt look at frieza, which doesnt seem like him. o well, great job!
*~* Cat *~* |
Reviewed By: Lady Foeseeker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 22:18 CDT
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You should gloat. You're very smart. congrats! On the test scores and yet another GREAT chapter! Now you have two things to gloat about!!! ^__^ I love your story and I can't wato for the next chapter! ^_^ Later! |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 20:28 CDT
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*shakes head and sighs*
Good thing you knew you couldn't catch me... Jeez...
You don't need to ANNOUNCE to everyone that you're psycho; they already know, if you claim to be friends with the likes of ME.
Nice chapter by the way. YIPPIE! Veggie needs to be bitch-slapped, though. I mean really! Grr... |
Reviewed By: Silenced [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 16:37 CDT
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LOL awesome chap, I loved your Vegetable thing |
Reviewed By: Lady Foeseeker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 13:37 CDT
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Yet another good chapter. I can't wait to see another one!!! ^_^ Great story! Later! |
Reviewed By: Trunks' Saiyajin Princess On: July 08, 2002 12:36 CDT
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wow, this is cool! and this is the first fic i've read where he's got a brother, not a lil sis or sumthin. its great so far! looks promising. (btw, i agree: makin up words sux)
*~*Cat*~* |
Reviewed By: Silenced [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, can't wait to read more. |
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