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Reviewed By: pretty_princess_2k6 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Updaaaate soon!!! I loved it. ^^
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Reviewed By: InuYashacrazy101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 23:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooooooooo i luv it!! inuyasha is so shy but if he likes kogme he should tell! anyway keep writing a good story! -inuyashacrazy101
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Reviewed By: InuYashasgirlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 08:01 CDT
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Thank you Happy-san!Do you like that I recomended it to you then?You should red my Bleach/Inu-chan crossover.You'll know more people.You ARE far enough to have met Renji,correct?
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Reviewed By: Greenice72 On: August 10, 2007 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!!! Considering the fact that I have no idea who half the pople were except InYusha but that's it. It was really interesting. I truely liked it. Very, well thought out. Yeah, that's all I have to say. ~~HAPPY!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reallylike you'r story! It's going well so far!! I LOVED READING IT!!!! YOU ROCK!
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Reviewed By: SummerNightxxx On: August 06, 2007 09:23 CDT
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Yeah it was alright. a bit cliche but definatley entertaining! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Vejhed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I tend to agree with ladygriddlebone. The story is great and entertaining but it does need just a little bit of work. But it is very original and fun to read.
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Reviewed By: InuYashasgirlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 12:27 CDT
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I can't help the Kikyou bashing XD I loathe her more than I do the show Naruto.And that's saying a lot O_o The newest Inu-chan question will probably involve her.
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Title: Great Story :)
Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Thanks for reviewing my story! I really liked yours. InuYasha/Kagome is my favorite couple on the planet with Miroku/Sango following right after, of course. :) HURRAY KIKYO BASHING! I can't wait to see that! ;D
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Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: InuYashasgirlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 14:44 CDT
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Thanks for the advice!I've read TONS of Inu-chan stories,but I can never seem to get the characters exactly right.And you were corrcet about what Miroku did.
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Reviewed By: ladygriddlebone [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's cute, which is why I read it in the first place, but I must admit I kind of had a hard time with this story. The switch from third person to first person had me going back to double check that I had read the first chapter correctly (shoulda read the notes at the top first, I guess). There are also some places where the characterization seems a little bit off (for lack of a better word, and I'm meaning for instance when Sango hits Miroku apparently for stating he would help her, or where Kagome outright dares Inuyasha to kiss her). It would be better - and this is just my opinion - if you would tell us what perverted and inappropriate thing Miroku did to get hit (or did he just ogle her suggestively? XD), or if someone else dared Inuyasha to kiss Kagome. But at other parts it felt like your characterization was spot-on, and I commend you for that. I really liked the way you portrayed Inuyasha's thoughts about the game, both when he had to choose and when he was trying to get an answer out of Sango. Overall, I'd say it just needs a little bit more care (like a thorough read-through before posting, to catch details that might have been left out or things that could be helpfully elaborated), but it's really not bad at all. And your grammar and spelling had me very much in awe - you did a very, very good job in that respect. I didn't see any glaring errors and it was a very smooth read. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: -xkagomex- [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 00:46 CDT
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woot woot ya! IM SO HAPPY u updated!! T_T even tho if u update again i wont be able to read it cuz im not gonna be how *sigh* oh well at least i will have alot of reading to keep me procupide when i get back... anyway ya thankiees for updating and update soon!
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Title: Done ^_^
Reviewed By: InuYashasgirlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 21:04 CDT
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Next chapter should be up soon.My internet was crazy earlier,so sorry for the delay.Keep reading,the next chapter will arrive soon!
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Title: NO!!
Reviewed By: -xkagomex- [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 00:34 CDT
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no y!!!! T_T i wanna read more y did u stop T_T nooooooo!!!!!!!! update!!!!!!or else
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Reviewed By: InuYashasgirlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 17:41 CDT
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I haven't finished the second chapter yet ^_^ Just keep looking,there should be a new one either later today or sometime tomorrow.
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