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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 13:18 CST
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So, IY has his human night, in public. Didn't go to badly, I'd say. It's good his friends are taking this so well, makes things much easier. Didn't doubt for a minute that he'd be a whiz in class, with some hard work. There's nothiing stupid a/b our hanyou, not at all. Interesting that the youkai are fading away, and that just with 'wanting' they become 'real'. Hmmm, makes for an interesting future, but then, so does this whole story. Glad for the update!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 16:47 CST
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Wow, IY is really growing up! I like it. Good to see he and K working together, still watching each others backs, and IY's circle of friends growing larger. Like how he feels he has to find them a place to live, he's really come a long way!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 14:12 CDT
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Yep, gotta love them ears! Glad IY's finding his way, growing up, learning a/b K's world, and open to possibilities. His characterization is wonderful, I love this!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 16:19 CDT
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Cool chapter. It's great that IY and Sess may bridge the gap between them, good to see them interact w/o trying to kill one another. Love the IY/K fluff, very nice. I really love this story, keep it coming!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 22:28 CDT
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Great chapter. Glad to see IY opening up to people, making friends, and them accepting him. Lovely scene with K and the claws. Am sure that Sess will come with all sorts of lovely aggrivation and angst, as well as answers. Can't wait to see!
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm...i keep wanting a chapter from Noriko's POV, i wanna know whats going through her head and what she really thinks of Inuyasha, and Kagome, and their relationship...Inu's not too good at hiding, but then again, he doesnt want to...and Peter is really...dense...and a flirt...I just honestly can't get enough of this story.
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Reviewed By: sufferingkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 21:50 CDT
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love it!!!!
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Reviewed By: sufferingkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 22:29 CDT
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love it
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 09:58 CDT
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Hmmmm, methinks trouble is ahead, if IY persists in 'outing' himself. This was a nice chapter. Seeing IY/K go out, no fussing, no osuwari's, just the two of them having a good time. Wonder what her mom will have to say? Can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol inu thinks chasing animals is stuff to do! so cute! i cant wait to see kagome and inu get a place together...thats gonna be...interesting, im sure!
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 08:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! this story is so awesome! i cant wait for more. you have good characterization, Inuyasha would so follow Kagome anywhere...lol
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Reviewed By: dororokun [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 14:53 CDT
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PLEASE MAKE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuYashasgirlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update, update, update! You must update ASAP! My overall rating would be a 100/10, if that were possible.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 19:19 CDT
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Very good, and Inu's character is perfect. Just like him! Eager to read more.
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Title: Here's Some Help
Reviewed By: InuYashasgirlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 18:00 CDT
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To add another chapter, go to 'My Settings' at the top,and click on 'My Fanfiction' then you can edit your story =) Loved it by the way!Make sure to check out mine: Truth?Or Dare? Hope this helps ~Kagome
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