| "Miko Malice" Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] |
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 04:32 CST
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I think death is too merciful for the crimes Kikyou has committed and no doubt will do more in the future. And while I strongly believe in a an eye for an eye in stories I can't quite condone having her raped as a punishment. So I have for you a suggestion as to what to do with her. Have someone cast a spell on the sisters, striping Kagome of her memories of her time as a slave, and plant them in Kikyou, so that she has to relive those memories as if they were her own, but that way she isn't actually violated, and Kagome can be whole again. Oh and Kikyou definitely needs to be silenced too.
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 01:23 CST
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*phew* no killing between Inuyasha and Kagome. Read the whole story in one sitting and can't wait for the next chapter. I hope we get some Kagome and Inuyasha banter after the charm's off and before the end.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 00:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course Kagome could never hurt Inuyasha on purpose. You are doing well to gather everyone together, Kagome's mother and father, Kikyo, Inuyasha's parents. So who gets the message first. Will Kaede be the voice of Kagome again?
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 23:46 CST
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it seems like both fathers are lacking... one ignores his son's feelings the other turned a blind eye to the animosity that his daughter exhibited toward her sister. . . can't wait for what is coming next! ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: LiHudson [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 23:19 CST
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This chapter was a large improvement on the other one. Even though we seem to get further along toward the climax, I'm glad that Kagome has made a decision and that they have made some progress. Thanks for updating this story so often; I really enjoy your writing!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 18:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad that Kikyo is gonna get it later on, never liked her really. She tried to take Inuyasha to heck with her, and turn him into a human, without the ears! Such an evil walking clay-pot... Anyway, really liked the update, and I can't wait to read the next one!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 00:44 CST
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now we're waiting with baited breath, indignant from all of the injustice, suffering and abuse. . . i can't handle the angst, must find some silly fluff to read. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice update! I can't wait to read the next chapter! How old is Kagome? Can Kikyo get run over with a carrage? Anyway, don't forget to update again!
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 12:40 CST
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Yay! Mommy to the rescue! Stupid Taro.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 23:35 CST
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hmm, cat senses are just as acute as a dog's... i would imagine she would smell her daughter's scent trail and location(then again i can be obsessively analytical). . . so, now the s#*+ is going to hit the fan?! kagome is more 'princess' than kikyo, she's the product of two great houses. . . *rubs hands together in eager anticipation* ~ ciao, ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Kagome is about to be rescued by her mother! Yeah! And Kikyo is about to be exposed! Another YEAH! I can't wait to see how this goes from here.
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Title: WOOOOO!
Reviewed By: Auraidne_deep [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
bwahahahahaa!! People always say stuff like 'The Kikyo in my story was always mistreated through surcum-fluguwugahbla bla bla bla bla bla. You're reason was the best reason yet! And so very true.... hahaha. Don't get me wrong, I don't mind Kikyo, but I'm still a Kagome fan O.o ANYWAYS! On with the review! I'm in love with you story, haha! It's very hard to find a fanfic or an author who lasts over 4 pages nowadays... But you have exceeded expectations! Your fanfic is not only enjoyable and very creative, it's originality shines through. Your use of language and your grammar is fine, and so is the style of writing. Both thumbs up, so keep going! ^.^ Brilliant! Woo! Happy happy! Lots of love, critique Auraidne!!!! '.-
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 17:06 CST
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methinks you harbor much antagonism toward our dear kikyo. if she is reality challenged and mentally ill she must be pitied and put in a place where she is no longer a threat to herself and others... you would be doing society a favor. . . aww, fuzzy puppy/kitten kisses! ~ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: LiHudson [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 22:55 CST
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I liked your reasoning for Kikyo's behavior. Short, sweet, to the point, and totally accurate. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 17:17 CST
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PHFFSSTT HISST!! (the sound my cat makes when she's really really pissed) . . .i liked that, her youkai has a cruel biting sense of humor, even while she's trying to seduce someone >=] . . . wonderful chapter, exciting and amusing especially kagome's mother's plan. her dad may have married a youkai but must have maintained his prejudice *shakes head* ~ thank you, ginny
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