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Reviewed By: dicingalice On: January 24, 2009 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome! plain awesome! it's got the crack, its got the smut, it's got all the naruto pairings i enjoy most :) you do write OOC, mainly sasuke but also naruto, but i cant bring myself to mind it. also gaara is back to his creepy pre-shippuden self which 1)kind of makes me sad and i want to huggle him to make it all better but i fear i might end up sand-coffined 2)is so fucking H.O.T. iam rendered speechless and yearn for a kinky sequel! :D oh! and! your vocabulary amazes me. iam bilingual (german&dutch) and my english isn't too bad, but your style really is different and it's fun to look up words like 'flummoxed'... next time i review ill try to be less random. X) thanks so much for sharing, keep up the fictastic work! T.T (
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Reviewed By: Mad-Hatter [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would just like to inform you that there were time's in this fic that made me Laugh to the point for tears and that my dear has been very hard to do as of lately so thank you i very much in joyed this fic.
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Reviewed By: ANGELBOY613 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your ending could have done without the phone call. I think Lee's professing his love for Gai was the high and funny note. About Gaara and Neji not knowing who each other were. Well you already explained administrators could look up isp addresses, email, etc...They're both administrators, so they'd be able to discover each others identities. I think maybe Sakura overhearing Sasuke and Naruto's love talk would have been good. She'd then think that at least she could settle for Lee. But then she'd over hear Lee talking trash about her and confessing his love for Gai. Yeah, trashing Sakura would be a great ending. Thanks again for sharing the tale with us. It was enjoyed.
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Reviewed By: ANGELBOY613 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 05:00 CDT
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I don't get why Naruto would lie, make himself look stupid(er) to cover for Gaara attacking him. Especially since he was concerned about a repeat performance.Oh well. I loved this: "What do you see in her?" Naruto shrugged. "Can't remember anymore." He added with a wink, "Besides, you know what they say: Black is the new pink." And the 'clapper' in Sasuke's bedroom was unexpected and made me laugh/smile. I can honestly say that I've never read a fan fiction before that had the 'clapper' in it. It was nice 2 see Naruto and Sasuke just cuddle to sleep as well. That's a good way to start-just getting comfortable with each others presence.
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Reviewed By: ANGELBOY613 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 04:03 CDT
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I don't know why; but 2 of my reviews were cut short. Not everything I typed showed up. Let's see if i can add it here. The one about Neji avoiding the stalker issue and when Naruto asked him straight out_thought Neji was a bad person using 1/2 truths and not being honest with Naruto_1 of the reasons why he doesn't deserve Naruto. Sasuke may piss Naruto off; but at least he's honest with him. The one about Gaara. Didn't care for Gaara's treatment of Naruto_was basically rape. Didn't care for Naruto's handling of the situation. Why did he allow himself to be violated, dirtied by Gaara's blood lust and sexual actions. Why did he not call on the power of Kyuubi and stop him. He should have dealt with Gaara the way he said he dealt with Kyuubi--bitch slap Gaara and tell him he will not submit. I also thanked you for your time, talent and effort in writing/sharing your story/stories with us.
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Reviewed By: ANGELBOY613 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 03:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I definitely liked the public display of affection. I would have liked Neji to witness some of their intimacy and comment on how he can see that he could never win Naruto's heart because Naruto already gave it to SAsuke (something mushy and fateish like that) This was great: >>Sasuke mentally added her to his list of `People to Dispose of If I Ever Turn Evil'.
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Reviewed By: ANGELBOY613 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 03:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
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>>Neji felt a surge of anger, after an intense pang of guilt at the way Naruto still didn't suspect him.
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Reviewed By: ANGELBOY613 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
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>>The hell if he was going to sit here, being molested against his will> if you tried the friends thing first. It seems like a hassle at first, but -" "Unnecessary." "You could try -" "No." "Maybe - " "Silence."
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Title: ENTERTAINING
Reviewed By: ANGELBOY613 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall, I'm enjoying the fic very much (just finished ch 8). Thanks for sharing it.
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Reviewed By: Dragonwolf On: May 20, 2008 11:02 CDT
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You have no idea how much I laughed through this fic. I think I liked the beginning best. The interaction between Sasuke and Naruto there, it was just so great and funny.
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Title: lil_lo (not signed in)
Reviewed By: Lil_lo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 08:45 CST
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I'm reviewing from memory, but one of the best parts about this story is the way Neji tried to get Naruto. Yes he was underhanded and stalkerish but he also came off as earnest. You know that feeling you get when you watch Naruto and he says or does something that has you rooting for him and knowing that he's hurting like hell at the same? I felt like that for Neji. It looks like Sasuke is going to end up with Naruto, which I'm fine with because it's your story, but please don't feel like you have to stick Neji and Gaara together. It's alright if you do, but I feel like that's a rebound couple.
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Title: Everyone else is doing IT
Reviewed By: Margaret On: December 02, 2007 03:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Actually stayed up till 3:20 am reading it despite the fact that I have to get up early. I'll definitely be checking out more of your fiction. If they are all as good as this one, you will have acquired one very loyal fan. Thanks for sharing.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 15:38 CST
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This is a really good chapter! The thought of Lee and Gai together didn't effect only you, man! Still I can't wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: Dark Shadow Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 05:56 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG. I loved your fic! ^^ It was very entertaining. Must say though...don't like how Gaara was perceived...considering I am a die-hard Gaara fan...but otherwise, it was awesome! ^^ I'm glad Sasuke and Naruto ended up together. I am rather fond of those pairings. The asshole and the innocent. XD Can't get too much more perfect than that. But anyways...I fell out of my chair about the Lee and Gai thing...*shudders* I would much rather not try to wrap my mind around their sexual explorations....ew. The thing that comes to mind is one of them screaming something about "youth" the whole time....*shudders* Anyways! Thanks for the entertainment. And it was rather funny ^^
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Reviewed By: xstargirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 03:01 CST
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wow. i just read all of it today and have got to say that was great! as disturbed as i was not like the whole gay thing that was truly great. it was so funny. i feel sorry for lee though. him being my favourite and all. and i feel sorry for neji. not gaara though. dont really like him. please update soon coz that FABULOUR excellent job!
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