| "Object of Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 10:15 CDT
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I knew he was going to get mad. But at least they've safe. . .for now. I can't wait to read the next part. I just love Kakashi, he makes me laugh with his comments. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: narutojjang On: August 13, 2007 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is so LOL! funny! but it's kinda perverted... D: i think the funniest parts are when they do something corny, like when sasuke yells naruto's name and naruto becomes heart-broken. i dunno what lee and gaara are there for though. i think i'd rather want to see sakura... but actually the best thing is if you write about your own favorite characters. ^^
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Reviewed By: Jessica_Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 15:24 CDT
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Whee! Love your story! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: evilvixen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! Horny Sasuke deciving a Naive Naru-chan...Hahaha. I enjoy it a lot! Don't worry, i will keep my panties on while waiting for the next chap!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 03:29 CDT
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Great chapter! Hope Sasuke doesn't get too angry at the others. Look forward to the next one!
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: August 09, 2007 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins* I can JUST see Lee fainting if Sasuke got ahold of Naruto and they went at it like minks...He's that innocent and very shy! He's kinda like Hinata only with a mask...Question-though-are any of the couples mentioned-GaaLee, KakaIru and ShinoKiba together yet? Because I know obviously SasuNaru aren't YET! I doubt Kakashi and Iruka are, otherwise Iruka wouldn't be yelling at Kakashi like that in public...Much less calling him a sick pervert... And if they were already together Kakashi wouldn't be able to keep his hands off Iruka. So what will Sasuke pull next?
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Reviewed By: nic chich On: August 09, 2007 23:25 CDT
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OMGoodness! That was amazing. thank you for updating so quickly and i cant wait to read more. And yes i really think that this is really good.
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Reviewed By: darkness_is_beautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 19:00 CDT
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wow...yeah...wow again...great...i love it!! i can't believe sasuke did that though! i hope you update soon :D --darkness_is_beautiful--
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Reviewed By: Jessica_Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 16:41 CDT
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Hm, this story seems like it's going to be real good! can't wait till you update!
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Reviewed By: nic chich On: August 08, 2007 20:46 CDT
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Wow! Really good start so far i hope you update soon because that was really
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Reviewed By: evilvixen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... Horny Sasuke... Willing Naru-chan... Magic powders... YAY!WOOT! Update! I Wanna know what will happen!
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: August 08, 2007 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*LOL* Poor Tsuande! She's going to have a major headache soon! Because I dunno how the black powder works, but if it hasn't been tested, then no one knows the side effects, much less how Sasuke will go back to normal...So cough up the GaaLee, KakaIru and ShinoKiba, hm? *taps feet* By the way if I was Kakashi, I wouldn't be mentioning to Iruka that I caught Naruto without his pants...*evil grin* Since we all know how protective Iruka is of Naruto!
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Title: OMFG!
Reviewed By: itachi wifey [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this story is so freaking good woozers i mean my eyes nearly popped out of my head wen he pulled out narutoz thing in public wow and having kakashi seein him like dat i still can get over it please keep ritng PLEASE
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 03:27 CDT
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I like the beginning of this story. Wonder if Naruto will actually stay away from Sasuske. I can't wait to find out what happens later on!
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Reviewed By: PITA [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an interesting story. The plot is a little weak but I'm sure it will get better. Hope you update soon!
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