| "Object of Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: nic chich On: August 09, 2007 23:25 CDT
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OMGoodness! That was amazing. thank you for updating so quickly and i cant wait to read more. And yes i really think that this is really good.
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Reviewed By: darkness_is_beautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 19:00 CDT
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wow...yeah...wow again...great...i love it!! i can't believe sasuke did that though! i hope you update soon :D --darkness_is_beautiful--
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Reviewed By: Jessica_Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 16:41 CDT
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Hm, this story seems like it's going to be real good! can't wait till you update!
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Reviewed By: nic chich On: August 08, 2007 20:46 CDT
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Wow! Really good start so far i hope you update soon because that was really
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Reviewed By: evilvixen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... Horny Sasuke... Willing Naru-chan... Magic powders... YAY!WOOT! Update! I Wanna know what will happen!
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: August 08, 2007 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*LOL* Poor Tsuande! She's going to have a major headache soon! Because I dunno how the black powder works, but if it hasn't been tested, then no one knows the side effects, much less how Sasuke will go back to normal...So cough up the GaaLee, KakaIru and ShinoKiba, hm? *taps feet* By the way if I was Kakashi, I wouldn't be mentioning to Iruka that I caught Naruto without his pants...*evil grin* Since we all know how protective Iruka is of Naruto!
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Title: OMFG!
Reviewed By: itachi wifey [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this story is so freaking good woozers i mean my eyes nearly popped out of my head wen he pulled out narutoz thing in public wow and having kakashi seein him like dat i still can get over it please keep ritng PLEASE
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 03:27 CDT
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I like the beginning of this story. Wonder if Naruto will actually stay away from Sasuske. I can't wait to find out what happens later on!
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Reviewed By: PITA [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an interesting story. The plot is a little weak but I'm sure it will get better. Hope you update soon!
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