| "To the Amusement Park" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: hurry On: January 30, 2008 15:05 CST
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make a new chapter already
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 09:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
UHHHMMM...? WHERE'S THE FIRST CHAPTER. MAYBE IT WAS DELETED IN ERROR...BUT THIS STARTS WITH CHAPTER 2
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Reviewed By: smiley118 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I can't wait until they go to the party. Please keep writing because I want to see what happens in the haunted house.
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 11:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i love it! you should try to make the chapters a little longer. I mean they like take no time at all to read.! love the story tho. Please update soon! :D have a nice day.
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Title: HI
Reviewed By: Makai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 19:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hello, I like your story! Um I think you should try to make the chapters a little longer, they take no time to read! Please Update!!:)
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Reviewed By: InuYashacrazy101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 20:34 CDT
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its me again #1 fan!! kool story so far! and u should update asap coz dont torure us! anyway ill reveiw when i see the next chapter(s) -inuyashacrazy101
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Reviewed By: *starfall* On: August 20, 2007 01:04 CDT
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LOL kagome called the guy a bastard! that's something you don't hear from her everyday. love the fic so far and i'll try to review as much as i can my mom rushes me a lot,but i'm always up late.update a soon as possible please!!
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Reviewed By: InuYashacrazy101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 20:39 CDT
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oh yea *throws fist up* 2 chapters!!! i luved it i think if u put more chapters with this it will turn out great!i luv the way inuyasha was panicking coz of the car!! well no offence to the other reveiwer but i think im ur #1 fan!! ^_^ ok so update asap! -inuyashacrazy101
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Reviewed By: secret me On: August 14, 2007 08:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story pleas make another chspter I want to know what happens.
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