| "Yu-Gi-Oh GX Digi-Stars: Twilight Wars" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 09:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice chapter! Hope to see more!!
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Title: great new fic
Reviewed By: sirlucario [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great can you hurry to the part where you reveal serena's nija abilities that wulod be great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Great job
Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 19:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was a great first chapter. I almost feel sorry for Aster when Hikari gets her hands on him...almost. Also how about instead of Jaden facing Rose it is Naruto?
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: matn90 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, thats a lot you have written. And it's all awsome! By the way, my new chapter just got in. My computer was broken and we had to fix it, I sware I need a better CPU. Good luck Later
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Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool new fic. I like it. Keep up the good work. Oh when you get to the part where Bastion is dueling 'White Chazz' could you have a few of the heros(Naruto is one of the people I'd like to see) be there to cheer him on. Other than that I like it. I look forward to reading the next chapter and new updates on 'Darkness Moon'
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