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Reviewed By: RoseOfSand On: October 11, 2007 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright another chapters up! Keep up the good work I want to know what will happen next.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2007 14:34 CDT
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Now that was a chapter long and good I really really like this story but I was wondering in this story is Naruto`s mother dead or is she still alive with no idea her son is alive or something like that it would be cool if she is still alive and have her come back to Konoha and find ot her son is alive that wolud be cool in my opinion either way I still like your story so please update soon and keep up the very very good work
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2007 14:34 CDT
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Now that was a chapter long and good I really really like this story but I was wondering in this story is Naruto`s mother dead or is she still alive with no idea her son is alive or something like that it would be cool if she is still alive and have her come back to Konoha and find ot her son is alive that wolud be cool in my opinion either way I still like your story so please update soon and keep up the very very good work
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow your fic is so funny, but Mizuki is really a jerk, glad you got him in character.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 02:03 CDT
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I thought this chapter was really good lol I thought it was funny as hell when the 4th scared him that and Naruto tried to hug him but went face first into the ground oh wel keep up the good work and please update soon or when ever you can
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Reviewed By: snowecat (not signed in) On: August 24, 2007 04:53 CDT
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Wow, Naruto took it better than I thought he might. Wonder what the birthday is going to be like. All I can think of is Not Pretty. I foresee a great deal of pain in the near future. Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 10:27 CDT
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So far I love the story lol I love the nickname Naruto gave him Driftwood lol anyways keep up the good work and please update soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 14:19 CDT
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So far I think this will be yet another good story of yours I just hope you will update your stories moreanyways keep to the good work
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Reviewed By: snowecat(not signed in) On: August 12, 2007 18:05 CDT
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Wow, this is really neat. Hope you keep going. How will this affect his stealing of the scroll and his Genin exam? How would people react if he told them about a man only he could see? It'd be neat if Naruto was the only one Arashi could touch, they deserve that much.
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Reviewed By: RoseOfSand On: August 11, 2007 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the fic so far so if you would can you please update I want to know what happens next.
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