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Reviewed By: Fairygirl13 On: February 12, 2008 17:12 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It's getting really good. Please make it a girl with inuyasha's temper and looks like kagome please!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Geri On: February 12, 2008 13:13 CST Comment/Review: WHOO-HOO!!! PUPPY EARS!!!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 22:59 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Cute story so far. Inuyasha sure was quick in fulfilling Kagome's mother's wish for grandchildren. It should be interesting to see how a pup will change the family dynamic. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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Reviewed By: DPrincess On: February 03, 2008 20:00 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I LOVE this Story!! PLEASE.....PLEASE.....UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: iluvinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 15:55 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved your story its so cute!!!! You are a great writer!!!! I've read many stories on this sight and yours is my second favorite!! The plot is great I don't know if you should make another chapter but if you do then maybe it should be about while they are building the house, and then maybe a little about their life afterwards. And maybe like their future ( I mean their present) in which they look almost the same and they have kids and they are with Kagomes mom because its the future. I don't know if I made much sense but whatever. :)
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Title: love the story Reviewed By: pouplr lady On: September 07, 2007 17:54 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: love your story, iam galid that inuyashas and kagome are to gether and not him and kikoy.
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Reviewed By: Inugirl123456 On: September 03, 2007 20:02 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I rated your fanfic 10 cause I thought it was totally cute and I felt so into it. Like I wanted more and more. It ROCKED!!!!!!!!!!! >.<
u should make a next chap,I bet it'll even better.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 16:32 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: maybe you could show in the other chapters certain closures of the group in your own way... like inuyasha & sesshoumaru... sesshoumaru, rin & jaken... inuyasha/kagome & kouga... miroku & sango... just some suggestions... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 16:11 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: interesting story... really liked it... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: InuYashasgirlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 15:09 CDT Comment/Review: Another chapter, please!
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Reviewed By: rinsama---15 On: August 16, 2007 10:23 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: THIS WAS WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!! You have to do another one. At least another chapter. PLEASE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 21:29 CDT Comment/Review: WhooHooo!!!! Great Story. I loved it so much.
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 On: August 14, 2007 12:12 CDT Comment/Review: awwww. so cute =]]
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Reviewed By: InuYashasgirlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 11:40 CDT Comment/Review: I loved it! It's funny how Kagome finally yells at Hojo and her friends! You must make this longer, it's so good! ~Kagome
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Reviewed By: Arii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 11:09 CDT Comment/Review: Oh my...I love it! Great one-shot.
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