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Reviewed By: silverfeather [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 21:33 CST
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holy crap, that musta been harsh...man, poor Kagome...oh, great update!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You could've just said an oni is an ogre. Anyways, nice update! Very emotional and true to the way InuYasha would act in this situation (or anyone for that matter because Kagome seemed pretty on point too). I especially like the end where he reffered to her as his 'broken angel'. It was cute. A total 'fluff' moment which lessened the atmosphere left after Kagome's rape scene. I'd say this is the best chapter yet, but I'm sure the next chap'll outdo it as always. I can't wait to see what you have in store next! -Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 17:08 CST
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this story is really good! can't wait for the next update! but could the chapters maybe be a little longer...? and about the rape scene, it would kinda add to the drama/fit in nicely but i'd feel sadistic going so far as to ASK for it...so its up to you. i'll be reading every update regardless :) -Amber
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Reviewed By: geisha120000 On: December 13, 2007 03:48 CST
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do put what you think should be in the story. I do look foward to a lemon scene with IY/Kag hehe anyway do u think u can make the chapters longer?
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Reviewed By: arielle langley On: December 12, 2007 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story i read it every single time theres an update but i personally think you should definetely put the rape scene in there! i love stories like that i know im sick huh? lol but continue the excellent work that your already doing in all your other stories and update soon please! thanks
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 21:26 CST
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Omg inuyasha where u at help her!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG KAGOME IS GOING TO BE RAPED!!!! INUYASHA!!!! WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU GOING!!!!!???!!!
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Reviewed By: sdfjkhui adifhiu On: December 06, 2007 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry and review i cant wait!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 06:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ooo please update then!! i wont be here for awhile after the 3rd T-T anyways OMG INUYASHA GET KAGOME'S DAD!!
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Reviewed By: Chaya_09 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good luck on your test also i love your story I can't wait for the next chapters.
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Reviewed By: kewlchick On: November 13, 2007 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool story.Can u make another chap.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 21:20 CST
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chap4...i love the ending to it. it was very suspensful and whatnot. the story is heading in a nice direction, keep up the good work :D
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Reviewed By: Kagome178955 On: November 12, 2007 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg please make another chapter this is the coolest story!!!
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Reviewed By: love me On: November 12, 2007 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please o plzzzz make a nother chapter I love this story
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