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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love your fanfic! i cant believe that happendd to kagome=( it was sooo sadX( inuyasha should go and beat her father up...or kill him at least...augh so frustrated...i really wanna know what inuyasha does when he realizes it was her dather...than hell get whats coming to him! update soon please=) good workXD
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Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 14:33 CDT
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Oh, this kinda goes with that song Date Rape by Sublime.
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Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more asap please. This is so sad.
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Reviewed By: Princess Stormcloud0217 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 01:28 CDT
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OMG!!! I have been lookin for this fanfic ever since I read up to here! I have been everywhere from fanfiction.net to...I forget the name, but,PLEASE,you MUST continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: come on On: January 28, 2008 18:47 CST
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plz make a new chapter
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Reviewed By: innocece_lost14 On: January 26, 2008 22:00 CST
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OMG!!! I THINK THIS FF IS AWESOME!!PLZPLZPLZ UPDATE SOON!!!I WONDER HOW SANGO AND MIROKU ARE GOING TO REACT WHEN THEY FIND OUT WAT HAPPENED TO HER.DOING GOOD SOO FAR!!^-^
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Title: AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
Reviewed By: TamTam On: January 15, 2008 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is so sweet!!!!!!I hate that guy make him get executed.
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Title: Onigai!!!
Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 05:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style of writing is fairly unique but, your spelling and grammar is a bit off at times... I love this fanfic!!!!!!!!! It was one of the first ones i read when I joined mediaminer and I check it every week to see if there's an update!!! And I understand fully wht you mean by writer's block!! I sot of have it at the moment and I also don't have time to write.... :( any way Keep up wih it and please write more soon!! -Draca
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Title: plz write more
Reviewed By: fdgsd On: December 26, 2007 23:45 CST
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plz write more
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Reviewed By: silverfeather [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 21:33 CST
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holy crap, that musta been harsh...man, poor Kagome...oh, great update!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You could've just said an oni is an ogre. Anyways, nice update! Very emotional and true to the way InuYasha would act in this situation (or anyone for that matter because Kagome seemed pretty on point too). I especially like the end where he reffered to her as his 'broken angel'. It was cute. A total 'fluff' moment which lessened the atmosphere left after Kagome's rape scene. I'd say this is the best chapter yet, but I'm sure the next chap'll outdo it as always. I can't wait to see what you have in store next! -Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 17:08 CST
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this story is really good! can't wait for the next update! but could the chapters maybe be a little longer...? and about the rape scene, it would kinda add to the drama/fit in nicely but i'd feel sadistic going so far as to ASK for it...so its up to you. i'll be reading every update regardless :) -Amber
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Reviewed By: geisha120000 On: December 13, 2007 03:48 CST
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do put what you think should be in the story. I do look foward to a lemon scene with IY/Kag hehe anyway do u think u can make the chapters longer?
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Reviewed By: arielle langley On: December 12, 2007 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story i read it every single time theres an update but i personally think you should definetely put the rape scene in there! i love stories like that i know im sick huh? lol but continue the excellent work that your already doing in all your other stories and update soon please! thanks
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 21:26 CST
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Omg inuyasha where u at help her!!!
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