"While You Were Gone" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Trunks' Girl 787 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 07:43 CST Comment/Review: That was GREAT. I've been reading this since it came, but this is my first review. I LOVE IT! Simply beautiful! |
Reviewed By: Knat On: December 24, 2002 17:38 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I REALLY LIKE IT!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!! *-* IT'S PERFECT!!!! |
Reviewed By: Darkened Angel On: December 09, 2002 19:25 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: THIS STORY KICKS ASS.... this is a very well done fic...please hurry with the ending! and thats an evil cliffhanger O_O |
Reviewed By: Nitelyfe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 22:03 CST Comment/Review: AAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!! What a cliffhanger. ;.; You better have the next part written soon or.. or.. argh! >_ |
Reviewed By: deathsythe queen/ trowa's chic On: October 26, 2002 12:51 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG I haven't read a story this good I love it please please write more it so interesting. I can't wqait for chappy 7 please hurry. That was so cool with the kiss and the trowa and duo.{Hehe me talking like me can't say sentences} This is thw best story I have read ever please e-mail me at saturn_deah_chic@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: kill hannah [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2002 20:35 CDT Comment/Review: i totally love this fic. fun and all that good stuff.
upload another chapter soon, PLEASE!!
:) |
Reviewed By: Lee-Chan On: August 27, 2002 17:34 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: AWEEEEESOOOMMMEEEEE!!!! I loved chapter five! Please get in more chapters soon, or at least chapter 6! You took a long time with making chapter 5 so please don't take so long this time!! Thanks!! Please write more soon, it's great!!!! Lee-Chan. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Anonymous On: August 21, 2002 17:45 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ack!! is there gonna be a chapter 5?? this fic is TOTALLY COOL!!! AWESOME!! you should really continue... |
Reviewed By: sphinx_raider [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2002 13:28 CDT Comment/Review: Hee...I wonder what Trio/Relena are gonna do to poor Heero, hehehe (sphinx_raider writes again!) |
Reviewed By: BlackDragona [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 21:10 CDT Comment/Review: cant wait for chapter 4! great story, keep it up!! |
Reviewed By: Lee-Chan On: July 31, 2002 17:56 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: AWESOME STORY!!! You have to continue it SOON!! I am so looking forward to chapter 5! Please PLease PLease continue soon I am begging you!!! CONITUNE!! Ahhhhhh!! ::goes crazy cause she wants you to continue:: Sorry ^-^;; but seriously please continue SOON!! Lee-chan |
Reviewed By: zoid-dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 15:36 CDT Comment/Review: more chapters. the story is 2 good to be done so far! |
Reviewed By: deathsythe_hell_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 14:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love this story and I can't wait till the third chapter
is up anywho I decided to give the story style of writing a
9 because I think that you can use more explainitory words. |
Reviewed By: Myst_Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2002 12:55 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I never read a GW fanfic before because I tend to avoid alot of yaoi fics. It's not that I'm against them. Keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: little-princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 07:11 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: woah, this was great! I'm glad I found something different from yaoi once. Not that I mind Yaoi too much, I just don't like reading it that much.
Well, that's not the point. You've done a great job here! I really loved this story! I can't believe the boys didn't find out! And Trowa and Trio together is a nice couple too! Both #3. I also love Duo's overprotectiveness over his sister and the 'jealousy' of seeing his baby sister with an other guy! He should've thought of that BEFORE he sent her down there hehe.
It was great! Love it. |
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