| "A First Time For Everything" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 16:28 EDT
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Beautiful as always. I love when they first met, and how foulmouthed she was throughout.
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Reviewed By: taity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2008 17:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A few spelling errors, but over all, a very dark and creepy fic!! Sango and Kohaku were always dysfunctional in the manga...she needs a humongus bitch-slap while he needs a few rounds with a full on mad Sesshoumaru!!! (Ring side seats anyone??)
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Title: *YAY for update*
Reviewed By: Laurilane On: July 24, 2008 08:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've always loved your stories, I look forward to them each time you update. And to be honest, I agree with you on Kohaku, there always seemed to be something wrong with him. Just on the external edges of his personality, something most people wouldn't catch, or they would dismiss if they did. Sango being insane like that, well I can picture that well too, but I'd hope she'd come to see reason soon. All in all, I love how you characterize all of them. Awesome work. cannot wait until the next update!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Cianna27889 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 13:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! Have enjoyed your stories a great deal, look forward to many more!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: domi_01 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 18:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW I loved these one-shots please write more...oh and as for the stories I know of two that are written amazingly, and i can send you their links if you want me to. i also write stories about rin and sesshy you can read them if you want to but I'm not sure if you'll like them. Anyways I loved the one-shots keep at it!
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Title: Nice!!!!
Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 18:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've had this favorited for a while but, I was kind of busy with my own stories. Now I see I should have read these earlier. This is my favorite pairing in Inuyasha and I agree that if I own it they would probably be making like jackrabbits too. I really like these and I hope you make more, I have a hard time making one shots. I always wind up adding more to the story. And hey even big girls cry sometimes, just like us men. Keep up the good work Krystal.
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Reviewed By: nyaa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 17:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Gee, what a landslide of comments! Yea, well I like it so far! It's so few who appreciate the Rin/Sess pairing, which is really a shame (and they're all stupid, 'cos it's the bestest pairing evah!!). And those who actually bother writing stories about them are usually quite... childish, and, frankly, bad at coming up with a nice original plot. That's why I find your short snippets very refreshing; they're well written; sexy and endearing. Please keep up the good work, despite the lack of feedback! *smoochies*
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Reviewed By: Romeus I [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 11:53 EDT
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Yay! Lol. Yeah...that's what I said at the end... Good story! Keep it up! Update real soon, can't wait :P arriverdci(?)
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Reviewed By: animegirl007 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 23:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know how I missed this first part, but I'm glad I caught it.....Rin and Sesshomaru can never part, especially over the bitch Kagura(I just hate her) Great first part...keep them coming!!!!
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Reviewed By: animegirl007(not logged in) On: August 26, 2007 23:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You devil!!!!!!! Making Rin drunk...That lucky girl!!!! Love it as always...I want more....I need more!!!!!
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