| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 20:09 PST
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lol silly boy he should just bite her before he faints
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Reviewed By: I'm Inulover1253 On: February 11, 2008 13:32 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEEEEEEP GOING PLEASE I kno i havent reveiwed lately Im sorry but i sware to you im loyal anyway please keeep going
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Reviewed By: future author On: February 09, 2008 23:58 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I was glad to see that you had updated. I wonder if Inu will decide to drink some of Kags blood since he hasn't fed yet. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Until the next udpate, good luck.
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: February 08, 2008 20:42 PST
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I think some nice Inu/Kag heat would have been a better uplifter from all the drama of last chapter. Anyway when is their relationship gonna come together finally? I mean we're already on ch.15 and nothing has really happened to solidify their relationship into more than a fling. Anyway it was still a good chapter and all, please update soon!!! Especially if your gonna have some nice Inu/Kag moments in it.
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 13:17 PST
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HAHAA! whoot, go claire! anyways, great chapter, though I hate it when Kagome got kinda ignored and scolded at. But she kinda deserved it, carrying out a stupid action like that. anyways, update soon! Kimiko =D
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 04:28 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. It was sad to see Kagome leave her family behind. But I am glad that she got to tell Inuyasha how she feels about all the upheaval he's put her through. Sometimes, it seemed like he only saw things from his side of it. But, clearly, I should have given him more credit. On the other hand, though, it's good that Kagome now knows what she's really facing. She won't foolishly put herself into dangerous situations out of ignorance anymore, thank goodness. The fight with between Claire, Albier, and Bill was hilarious. We did need a little pick me up after all the sad stuff. But I am extremely curious about 100% blood compatibility now. I mean, obviously you can tell what it means by the name. But, are there other effects that go with it, other than the blood being perfect for the nightwalker. The was Lilliana spoke of it, it almost seemed like a miracle of some sort. I look forward to finding out.
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 23:36 PST
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Hey whats up? Poor Miroku getting to friendly with the ladies he better watch it. I'm so happy that Claire is back to her old self, Sounds like Inu is stays away from Kags, He being upset with her for trying to get him and her self kill by being subburn and she did put him on a gult trip saying it is his fault she is in danger, feeling like a prisonor that she has to change her life forever, that was nice of him to let her see her family before she gose hidding for how long we don't know. But I have a feeling he might be paying Kags some time if he not hunting with his family and he hadn't been fead for 6 days. I can't wait to see more of your story, Good work and good luck!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 22:52 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahahhahahaha that fight was GREAT!! i love Claire :P 100% blood compatibility???? oooo that sounds intereting!! i like the idea :P so Inuyasha wont be hunting?? hmmm he will probly go bite Kagome lol
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 22:44 PST
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okay so kagome is a little retarded, obviously, it's kagome. :P Claire and Albier's fight was funny tho, and Bill's 'anti-profanity' rule made it great so what happens when there's "100% blood compatibility"? Can't wait for the next chaper; it's gonna be really good, I can tell ;) Ja! ~**Ookami Hime Suriya**~
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 22:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great!!!!! love the castration thing!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 21:52 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that everyone got out fine... feel bad for kagome she got scolded by almost everyone... but she did have a point when she was talking with inuyasha though... is there another reason inuyasha is addicted to kagome's blood... at least kagome has sango & miroku to keep her company now too... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Title: Nightwalkers
Reviewed By: Cookieparty On: February 03, 2008 07:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPTADE SOON i keep looking on here to see if you uptaded but u haven't please do it soon i love this story its so interesting UPTADE OR I WILL DIE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 19:42 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Title: um.......question.....
Reviewed By: inukaglover815 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 13:14 PST
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I have a question. now i might be wrong but i was under the impression that one shot meant just that a ONE chapter fic at most a two shot. now i havent actually read it....but i thought i would suggest that you change your description to something else. It's less misleading that way.
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Reviewed By: sillylillybillygoat On: January 28, 2008 22:23 PST
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love the story, i really do. not like another i've read before. well rounded characters, i think. my only complaint is that kagome doesnt come off nearly as strong as i would have hoped and that i think the character would be capable of, especially in this chapter. not to say yur doing a bad job by any means! 100 times better than anything i've read lately. keep up the good work! ;) looking forward to an update
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