| "Bring Forth the Youkai and Let the Good Times Roll" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: HanyouMax25 On: September 05, 2007 22:59 CDT
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I think this story is excellent, and I would love to read a another story if you decide to write it. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: September 04, 2007 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A few gramatical errors here or there but on the whole it was very good!!! I enjoyed it a lot!!! I especially loved the "maybe" left after the end. I would really like it if you wrote a sequel. I love stories where Inu and Kag get together and then there is Kouga and Houjo bashing in later chapters. (in the literal sense of course) anyway it was a very good read. Keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: Hab2744 On: September 03, 2007 22:53 CDT
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Very Descriptive, so Kagome being secretive to get want she wants sometimes a dim witted hanyou needs to be tied up and teased to truly understand just were he sits with the woman who loves him.
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Reviewed By: googoo119 On: September 03, 2007 22:49 CDT
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Conquest Mount Hanyou, That is really fun!!! Intresting idea to add that Inuyasha kept the stripes all over his body, The only I would ask for is a little oral from Kagome I thought Inuyasha might want to give a little more to get a lot later but it was still great. Please continue if you want to,,,,
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: adam&eve On: September 03, 2007 22:45 CDT
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You did a wonderful job on the Dom/Sub just can be really tough to do, So I quess Youkai Inuyasha Really is just a little lost puppy who needed a rope and a girl with no panties. Hope you write more.
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story. Definitely one of the best I have read (is it hot in here?{fanning self}). More please.
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: kaglovessexyinu On: September 03, 2007 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! you are such a good writer..that was the best fanfic of my year..for real. you must write more. like about childeren..or something..that was hot sexy and awesome..plz write more!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing story... really liked it... good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You naughty little muffin! I think I bruised my coccyx with that one. I loved it. I really liked the fact that you put them on equal footing with the whole dom thingy. They got to do it to eachother. There are some fics out there that make that stuff way too creepy, but your was enjoyable. I'm also glad you threw in Kagome's little inner battle over him leaving her to chase off after Kikyo. Made it more realistic to see her feelings on that. "His eyebrows resembling plump caterpillars doing push ups as they moved." - Now that was my favorite line. 'Conquest Mount Hanyou' *snickering my patooty off* Thanks girl, I loved reading this!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 11:04 CDT
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Hot, hot, hot! Love this, one of the best I've read. Love your work!
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Reviewed By: kaelynn On: September 03, 2007 09:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
perfect across the board. i positively love it! there's just no way that there could be anything negative with your story. it had me smiling the whole way through. your style of writing is flawless. There aren't many I can say that about, but your's is definitely one of the tops. i hope to read more of your stories in the future!
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