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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 18:19 CST
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Totally KAWAII!!! Raito-kun is totally adorable.. want to just pinch his cheeks!!!! Well this is getting interesting and I wonder how it will turn out L better watch out!
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Title: Happy!
Reviewed By: PirateCaptainBo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yatta!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You updated!!!!!! Super happy!! XD You spelled the names correct! Don't worry! XD I see so Light-chan didn't want to become a god really, his friend did. I like the clues you have Light-chan give out. He is like a little good luck charm. :D Little Light-chan making cake how cute!!! Update soon! Hmm... well if Light-chan doesn't go Wammy, I still hope he meets the others who are lined up to be L successors! XD Love Matt Mello and Near! XD Update again soon please! Such a good story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Title: AMAZING!
Reviewed By: PirateCaptainBo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really spell The Whammy House, The Wammy House, no 'h' in Wammy. And you spell Ryuk like so, or like Ryuku, I checked in Wikipedia. Besides that, everything is perfect! I can't wait to see what happens next now. The flashback got me interested even more. So it seems that Raito wasn't working alone as everyone thought he was. He had an acomplish from the very beginning before even Misa-chan! I wonder who it is. And I'm super duper curious to see if chibi Raito is the real Raito only chibified. I wouldn't really be surprised, seeing all that the deathnote could possibly do. XD Please update soon! I can't wait to see the next chapter! Its such a good story already and has a addicting plot I can't wait to see what will happen in next chapter! And how the other kids at Wammy will take to Raito. Mainly Mello, Matt and Near. I think with the way Chibi Raito is acting now that he and Near would get along. Oh and if you ever want to contact me.. I'm also at fanfiction.net under PirateCaptainBo, I share the account with my twin. XD
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Title: Wammy
Reviewed By: Lil Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's Wammy and I loved the story! it's amaazing how he was excatly Raito with a hint of youth. If it wasn't for the youth pretty much they are TWins!
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Reviewed By: midnightphoenix13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 04:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although this story has only just been started, I can see that it could turn into a piece of genius. It is an idea I have never seen before and I cannot wait to see where everything is leading. Please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Hammer-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2007 19:22 CDT
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Awwww~ This is great! I love this so much~ update soon please!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 17:54 CDT
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I love Death Note and I love your story.... it is really interesting.... I really want to know who little Raito is!!!! hope you keep om writing this... You are doing a Great Job!
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