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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGSH FINALLY!! That's so funny that you updated right now, cuz I was just re-reading your first chapter a few days ago (hoping desperately that you'd update >_
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Reviewed By: dreamerswaking [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. It's really interesting. Do you post anywhere else or just here? I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 22:30 CST
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i wish you would update! light-chan is so cute!
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Reviewed By: yume3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 02:07 CST
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This is really good. Raito and L already almost kissing, how cute. In a werid way of coruse since Raito is only 5 at the moment. The interaction is adorable. Hope you will be able to update soon^^. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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How cute! ; ; please update soon!
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Title: WTF??
Reviewed By: dipilidopa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 09:16 CST
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i am soo stopid, i didnt notice the apiloge! This explains some things.. ... and some not. questions: 1. how Light knew about L? 2. how he knew that its him? 3. whay light was frienfs with this idiout?? light is a genius snub, was he really that lonly? i demand an explaniton to this and flashbacks! (explantion dors not equals to "you see, i stayed his friend even he is an idiot-which i hate, has more god-complex than me and gave me dirty looks because...) all in all i like your fanfic and i hope you will keep on writing it because its very intresting!
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Reviewed By: dipilidopa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story! its so intresting, chibi light is adorable! i hope you will continue (and that I will know that you continued)
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO! NOT BACK TO WAMMY! Let little Light stay there with L and Watari *cries*. I love the story so far! Light's so chibi and adorable and SMART! And every little thing he does is filled with so much mystery and intelligence that I'm seriously going to pull out all of my hair if you don't update again soon and let me know at least a small bit of where Light is from... And Raito's past is slowly revealing itself... I SERIOUSLY want to know more. puh-LEEZ update again soon! I'm seriously hooked! L and Light, ticking attacks, awkward moments.. I love it all~! ^_^
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 18:19 CST
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Totally KAWAII!!! Raito-kun is totally adorable.. want to just pinch his cheeks!!!! Well this is getting interesting and I wonder how it will turn out L better watch out!
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Title: Happy!
Reviewed By: PirateCaptainBo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yatta!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You updated!!!!!! Super happy!! XD You spelled the names correct! Don't worry! XD I see so Light-chan didn't want to become a god really, his friend did. I like the clues you have Light-chan give out. He is like a little good luck charm. :D Little Light-chan making cake how cute!!! Update soon! Hmm... well if Light-chan doesn't go Wammy, I still hope he meets the others who are lined up to be L successors! XD Love Matt Mello and Near! XD Update again soon please! Such a good story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Title: AMAZING!
Reviewed By: PirateCaptainBo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really spell The Whammy House, The Wammy House, no 'h' in Wammy. And you spell Ryuk like so, or like Ryuku, I checked in Wikipedia. Besides that, everything is perfect! I can't wait to see what happens next now. The flashback got me interested even more. So it seems that Raito wasn't working alone as everyone thought he was. He had an acomplish from the very beginning before even Misa-chan! I wonder who it is. And I'm super duper curious to see if chibi Raito is the real Raito only chibified. I wouldn't really be surprised, seeing all that the deathnote could possibly do. XD Please update soon! I can't wait to see the next chapter! Its such a good story already and has a addicting plot I can't wait to see what will happen in next chapter! And how the other kids at Wammy will take to Raito. Mainly Mello, Matt and Near. I think with the way Chibi Raito is acting now that he and Near would get along. Oh and if you ever want to contact me.. I'm also at fanfiction.net under PirateCaptainBo, I share the account with my twin. XD
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Title: Wammy
Reviewed By: Lil Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's Wammy and I loved the story! it's amaazing how he was excatly Raito with a hint of youth. If it wasn't for the youth pretty much they are TWins!
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Reviewed By: midnightphoenix13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 04:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although this story has only just been started, I can see that it could turn into a piece of genius. It is an idea I have never seen before and I cannot wait to see where everything is leading. Please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Hammer-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2007 19:22 CDT
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Awwww~ This is great! I love this so much~ update soon please!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 17:54 CDT
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I love Death Note and I love your story.... it is really interesting.... I really want to know who little Raito is!!!! hope you keep om writing this... You are doing a Great Job!
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