"How to Write a Fanfic Review, GW Style" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zazies (milo) On: June 25, 2002 20:09 CDT Comment/Review: WOW O.O chap 5 and 6 was amazing. You could really feel the tension in the story. You made me feel like I was in the middle of the fight...well, not really.
Thoses were great chaps, i did not expected at all for a fight to insue instead of what happened.
Where do you get your material! It's like you have a encyclopidia of gundam wing fanfic or somethin'! MAN! XI
Then the cliffhanger at the end of chap 6, well, i don't like cliffhangers but they make me wanna keep reading, so kudos to that. (It was a good cliffhanger)
This story is good GREAT! and I can't wait to read the next chap. |
Reviewed By: Nozomi Anshin On: June 25, 2002 19:21 CDT Comment/Review: Oooooooooohh, I want more! Who's the therapist? WHO IS IT?????? ....I wonder....*isn't going to say what she thinks just in case she's right...* Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaase, hurry! I am definitely loving this fic. |
Reviewed By: Zazies On: June 25, 2002 17:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this chap is soo funny and good (chap 4, just in case). I never really expected Trieze to shut Wufei up with a kiss, then Wufei trying to get the upper hand; very nice.
Then what you did at the end when you inturupted, I've seen it done before, but It was still very funny! And when Wufei takes the script and writes all over it, THAT, was too funny! Stiaght to the point, just like I like it! LOL! whoa...well, i can't wait to read the next chap so... |
Reviewed By: fox of death On: June 25, 2002 16:36 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: he hee, this just gets funnier. |
Reviewed By: Bomber Girl On: December 14, 2002 02:43 CST Comment/Review: this is a kick ass story and I agree that ff.net it mean about what its been doing to NC-17 based fics. I don' think yours breached into that catagory so it should still be up. *shrugs* well, its a good sotry all through! ja ne! |
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