| "Don't Cry Anymore" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: MEANY!!!! JKJK
Reviewed By: DarkDemon123 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2011 13:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u made me cry SOO much!! u should write some more fanfics about absolute bf!!! GREAT job!! |
Reviewed By: ARedRoseForYou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 00:42 EDT
Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWW that made me cry!! oh wow i loved it more than words can say. that was like one of the best romance fic i've ever read. the beginning was. . . ehhh. but the end. ooh buddy the end was simply perfect. i LOVED it. i cried like a friggin baby at the end. im a hopeless romantic. NICEEEEEE WORK!
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Reviewed By: RaiMidori [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 19:03 EDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty spiffy! Heya, Minami, it's Rai ^_^. Yes, that means I finished ZK! It was so sad T^T. I was sobbing!!! Man, that is way cool. Your writing skills have improved~ Don't forget your periods! You have a few grammatical errors: When you use dialogue in this format, write it like this: He said, "DIALOGUE." Instead of this: He said "DIALOGUE." Kayzers? ^_^ And you always need a period. Always. Other than that, it was really cute! I luv luv luved it sooo much! YOU ROCK!!!!
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