| "Cross Dressing Mess!" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 23:23 CST
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I hate it when I get depression spelles I'm serious I think Im half Bipolar with my mood changes, My friend know me as haveing alot of energy and happy 95% of the time.....but frankly that couldn't be more further from the truth being alone makes me question my exsistance, hear someone talk smack onesome else makes my blood boil and a temper I have been slowly serpressing through the years berst and I can start raveing like a crazy lady, and some time I try to be happy but noting can make me happy even if nothing caused my sadness.....so weird....but I'm sure you realy didn't want to read that...*sigh* another flaw of mine T.M.I *to much information*.....*sigh*......................well enoph about me it seem the enigmic Sesshoumaru has finaly made his apearance....Sooooooooo does Sesshoumaru think Inuyasha is guy could the rumor go that far.......would Sesshoumaru cut Inuyasha off if he knew he was dating Kagome even if he knew she was a girl...........this is trubbling.....but I guess Kagome gots another friend who know her secret.......I wander how long it will be untill she gets expelled....*sigh*......I hope Kikyo doesn't appear in this fic again I don't like this one very much.............well I guess thats all I have to day for now hope you update soon...........Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Shortie On: November 17, 2007 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought the story was ok at some points but it moved way too fast like 10 things happened in each chapter and gave the reader a rushed idea. i think you are a good writer but should work on it.
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Reviewed By: hopelessromantic_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was a good chapie and i hope you feel better soon
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Reviewed By: hopelessromantic_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one word wow please update soon
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Reviewed By: RuneWarriorGal07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehe I'm stuck to this story like paper on glue, can't wait til the next chapter comes =P
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 20:19 CDT
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OMG I can't believe you just left your readers with that cliffy..........*pout*.........I can't believe Inuyasha did that ....what is Kagome going to say....This is crazy.....AAAAAAAAAAAA.....o gosh.....I'm still glade I'm not her though...sad I don't got Inuyasha but everything else seems kinda hecktic in her life....so not thankyou.....hehe...I reanly wonder if I had the oppition to which lives with her if I would.....cause ya never realy know what your going to do befor ya do it.....well any ways i'm rammbaling ....great chapter and up date soon.........Nyuka
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Reviewed By: xyanblue On: October 13, 2007 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i can't believe she sprang her ankle already and now inuyasha likes her for real and then he kissed her i hope he doesn't hurt her
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Reviewed By: Fookie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 13:24 CDT
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Eeee! This is so cute! It kind of reminds me of She's the man and GirlGotGame but I like the idea. I haven't read anything like it so far. Hope you update soon. =]
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Reviewed By: Kimaya Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 13:13 CDT
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awwwwwwww... It was so awesome. please write more
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 01:49 CDT
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Now I'm thinking Naraku is gay........Here is a mentle pictur for ya Naraku gay, he is standing in the corner of the showers with a buisness like suit on waiting to see all the guy in all there glory, when he listens to all that was going on with Kagome and stuff and then all the guys run in and he just watches them like the gay guy he is. Then when he steps out of know where It would make more sence right I'm mean what else could have have been doing there in order to hear all that was going on.
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Reviewed By: xyanblue On: October 02, 2007 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one word WOW and i can't believe naraku heard i just know he's planning something bad
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Reviewed By: Kimaya Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 17:45 CDT
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keep on updating. ;)
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Reviewed By: Kimaya Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more! write more! write more!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 22:31 CDT
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Well I guess I was right about him finding out realy soon.....and the reaction was priceless......This is going to be a realy interesting story from here on out....what will Inuyasha do....he can't tell on her right.......oh this is getting crazy.........please up date soon..............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: hopelessromantic_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i can't believe he found out that way
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