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Reviewed By: fireysuccubus666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2009 15:18 CDT
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OMG YAY finally an update!!! wewt keep it coming ive been following this story since it first came out and ill keep reading it faved you and faved the story cant wait for the next chappie
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Title: Awesome!!!!!
Reviewed By: akdreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2009 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really have enjoyed this story and am glad you are still working on it!!! Thank You!!!! I'm now on the edge of my seat wondering what has happened to Rin! Is this a way for Sesshomaru to get her back? Oh I hope so!!! I will be looking forward to your next exciting installment......
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Title: Keep writing
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2009 14:52 CDT
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I am really enjoying this fanfic. Keep going! Yea
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2009 17:31 CDT
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yay you finally updatedXD ive had this fic saved on my comp ever since last year when you updated in may...i like the direction that the fic s going=D and that last chapters has been my fav so farXD update soon=D please dont wait until next yearXD
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2009 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hmmm...why is everyone else dead and reincarnated except Sess? Kouga was a full demon as well so it shouldn't be just that Inu didn't live that long but a full demon would. I hope this isn't going to turn into a Kag/Sess pairing...(sorry but eww! LOL!) Kagome needs to give Inu a chance...Sango didn't remember until she touched her. Good story.
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Reviewed By: bk On: April 25, 2009 07:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the great story. This is getting more interesting with each additional chapter. There are so many questions to be answered. The next chapter will be really interesting. Sesshomaru seems to know what is going on, how much will he tell Kagome. I cannot wait for the next chapter to be released I hope it will be soon.
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 18:45 CDT
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hey wait...if ayame is in this now...will naruku show up as well?
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fanficXD its so good=D are you going to come out with a new chapter soon? please hurryXP
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 20:32 CDT
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this is a great story, but there's one problem and that is 12 year old girls are not in high school.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 19:39 CDT
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oh no, kouga's 'my woman nonsense coming up eh? sounds like fun, too bad they didn't awaken ayame's memories first and then had them bump into each other accidentally on purpose... fix them up before kouga's memories return. happy stuff girls' night out... i prefer sci-fi, anime and comedy so i had to choose my friends wisely or cultivate their tastes. . . a trick to using the right pronoun, example: "she wanted Kagome to have hope in the love that InuYasha and her had." if you are listing two or more people and need to use the correct pronoun, read your sentence without the other names ex: "she wanted Kagome to have hope in the love that her had." and you will see that you should have used the pronoun 'she'. . . fun chapter, excited about reading more! ~ pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 23:54 CDT
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sorry i hadn't read or reviewed in all this time; stuff happened, people died. . . the story seems to be progressing rather nicely and i like the the little remark about yash having learned math before even taking it (he had to have been paying attention when kagome was studying). if miroku and sango had been married in the previous life he will be very impossible when he gets those memories back. . . now that hopefully everything has settled down i plan to read and review regularly... by the way when i started reading the last chapter i couldn't help but feel i had read it already. ~ thank you, ginny
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Title: Repeated Chapter
Reviewed By: bookworm810 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 19:55 CST
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First, great story and I can't wait to see how everything turns out. Second, Chapter 8 is actually Chapter 7 posted a second time. Here's hoping that this was just a mistake you can fix soon, because I realy want to read more and soon.
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a Great Story!!! I love the way Kagome keeps meeting up with her old friends. The scene with her seeing Inuyasha for the first time again was priceless. Please update this soon...I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG its getting better keep going
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 00:24 CDT
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Good to see IY again, and know that he's linking up to the past, even if in dreams. Will help when he does remember. Glad Sango and K found each other and S remembered, so that K isn't so alone anymore. Problems....a few spelling errors, but the main thing is the tense. Going from her/he to I/me is confusing and jarring. One or the other is best, smooths things out. Anyway, glad to see this again, it's a fun story.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 23:21 CDT
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one must set up the board for a good game of chess, one must also set up the characters and scenes for a good story. . . i am enjoying the concept and look forward to happy reunions. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: JennyBoo On: October 30, 2007 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is nice. I'm hooked. More chapters!!! Please?
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 05:36 CDT
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OMG KEEEP WRITING
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 00:47 CDT
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oh good, so everyone will eventually remember their sengoku jidai lives. good chapter. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: LadyCash, not logged in On: October 15, 2007 21:04 CDT
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Excellent, Sango remembers! This will help K deal with everything else going on, and to reach her friends. Will there be problems? Angst? Evil? Will things be smooth? Of course not, how fun would that be? Although, you may very well make it smooth, and I'll read it just the same, cause this is a great story!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 22:24 CDT
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too bad she feels so let down, these are her friends who may not recognize her but they're safe, they're there with her... they're alive!. . . does yasha have his ears or does he have human ones? . . . watch your 'to', 'too', 'two' usage. . . a little read over with a spell check will catch most of the typos. . . good chapter! ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: coolasice102030123 On: October 07, 2007 09:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story write more please
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 04:27 CDT
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Another fine chapter. Wondered how IY would handle meeting her. Hmmmm, he's still got a ways to go. You had a few slip ups, mainly pov, or perspective, but nothing too major. Excited to see how you get these two together.
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Reviewed By: inufreak8910 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 06:19 CDT
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pleaze continue it!!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: smiley118 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 12:46 CDT
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I really like the story. Can't wait to see who Kagome meets next. Keep writing please!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 03:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the story, but as it has been pointed out there is the problem with the narration. It seems like most of it is in the first person, so I would make it all got that way. Everything is fine in the Intro (1st chapter). The switches from Third to fist and then to third person again are appropriate and interesting. The problem starts immediately after the first break in the first chapter (2nd chapter). The latest chapter holds most of the errors. I hope you update soon. I can't wait to see how the story goes!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 15:40 CDT
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this is an intriguing and well written story except for one itty-bitty problem, you need to be consistent with the narration. half the time it's done in the first person(i went to the store) the other half isn't(she went to the store). it can be a bit annoying/confusing. other than that it's really good! ~thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 13:58 CDT
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Update update update update Keep gonig please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Blackcrescendo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 13:03 CDT
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So far so good. Keep it coming!
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Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 08:23 CDT
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This is a really good story. Keep this up!!
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