| "Tsukiyo" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Sumisung [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2010 17:16 CDT
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Tsukiyo this is a very interesting story so far. The sense of mystery and fear in quite griping and the combination of characters and setting from both an 'Inuyasha' and 'Twilight' point of view is rather interesting. You are bringing those two different elements together in an intriguing and entertaining way. I like your descriptions of the rooms and what the characters have been wearing, and the image references were nice. The only negative criticism I have is that it does however feel a little rushed in places, so we are missing the depth of the characters development with one another, as the events are happening so fast. But overall it is very enjoyable to read. I look forward to seeing how the story and characters develop in the future. Good luck with your creativity, inspiration and updating. All the best Sumisung.
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Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever(not logged-in) On: December 31, 2008 13:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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you can look me up in the search box and click on my profile. it has a blue word that says e-mail and you can just e-mail me that way.
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Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever(not logged-in) On: December 29, 2008 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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i would be happy to draw any pictures for this fanfic. i'd just need a very descriptive e-mail. i think i like where this is headed. keep up the good work.
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Title: Tsukiyo is Awesome
Reviewed By: Wolfdogzgirl123 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2008 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic its awesome, just curious/a suggestion Could/Are u pairing up Kagome and Inuyasha? Oh and please continue!
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Reviewed By: inu-babe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2008 07:37 CDT
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that was an awsome story so far, you have to continue updatiing as much and as soon as you can plz!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Prinzess_Mika [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 09:37 CDT
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I quite like your Sesshomaru, he sounds really protective and real cool and I love the Twilight series by Stephenie Meyer :D can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Nikkismilesalot On: July 07, 2008 21:33 CDT
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omg! thank you! you are the best person on earth to me right now. seriously, ive been waiting for someone to wright a fanfiction based on stephenie meyers twilight. i knew it was bound to happen sometime escpecially for inuyasha because the characters fit so well. anyways your awesome :) the story seems really good so far. cant wait for an update !
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 00:28 CDT
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it entertaining I'll give it that ! you could make the chapters longer though
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When r u going 2 update? I just can't wait to see what's next
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Title: SLow down?
Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 09:14 CDT
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Good ideas and nice length of chapters but maybe you should slow things down a little? everything is happening too fast and there's not a lot of room for character development. Other than that it's okay... By the way this isn't a flame but constructive criticism. -Draca
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Great fic! But can you make your chapters a little longer.. plz?? But awesome FIC!
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