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| "Insecurities 1" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] | Reviewed By: ReesesBallet On: May 22, 2017 20:59 PDT
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Duo needs to give Wufei the best blow job in his life while Heero
comes up from behind to work on Duo's back door. (drool)
| Reviewed By: GataAgua [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 03:06 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm all caught up now, so I am now up to date. Very good story. Be happy when you have the next one out.
| Title: Nice
Reviewed By: CircleKV0012 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 14:45 PDT
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I love this story. I just like the idea of writing about all the guys insecurities in the first place. Then you just write a really good story to go along with it. I can't wait for the next chapter to see how Heero handles Wufei's and Duo's issues. Please update soon!
| Title: So glad you're still writing this!
Reviewed By: sylenctone (the lazy fangirl) On: July 14, 2008 07:21 PDT
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Thank you for the little recap at the beginning! This chapter was worth the wait, so yummy and hot. Still, there's a lot they all have to work out. I wonder what Une is going to do to them. The message from the school worries me, as does Duo's cold. And that phone call for Wufei too, for that matter. Those three have a lot of confessions to make to each other, and I worry that they won't have a chance to do that before life gets busy. Quatre is doing a bit better but I still don't think he understands Trowa at all. And Trowa has no idea how to talk to him and explain his own feelings. Or maybe it is more that he is afraid to for fear of losing Quatre. The five way date should be interesting. I just hope it doesn't go as fantastically wrong as I can see it doing. Maybe I'm just too pessimistic. I'm so glad you're still updating this! Thank you for writing! Your worrisome fangirl, jess
| Reviewed By: Niere [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 19:32 PDT
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Hi there. The first story was outstanding! The sequel is just as good, but unfinished. Any chance of an update?
| Title: Nice
Reviewed By: CircleKV0012 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 10:09 PDT
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So I read the dance and loved it so I checked out your other GW work. I love it too. So I cna't wait to see what happens. I like how you write Heero and Trowa, how emtionally and socially stunted they are. I mean other authors mention it but you make it more real. Nice job! Keep up the great work! And plese update soon!
| Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 19:33 PST
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The points of veiw are really interesting in this chapter. It is fun to see them all through the eyes of Zechs and Shaun. At the moment, I feel like I want to re-read the whole story because I've been reading way too much fic lately and I'm a little hazy on the finer details of what's been going on. Wufei and Heero were adorable on the plane. I loved this line: "From the way he let Chang settle down on his lap, Zechs wondered if his sister had been barking the wrong tree all this time." The kindness Zechs shows to Shaun the Obnoxious is very sweet. I'm *Very* glad they managed to find Trowa and Duo as quickly as they did. I just hope that Duo doesn't get too sick from the cold and that Heero doesn't kill someone for messing with the mission assignment. heh. I'll add my additional two cents when I manage to find time to re-read. Nine or ten chaps a day in my inbox is a lot. Maybe I subscribe to too much fic... Naw. Not possible! Thank you for writing! Your speedreading fangirl, Jess
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 20:55 PST
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Heh, how amusing. Neh. Keep updating will ya? Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: eve4mem On: October 05, 2007 09:56 PDT
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I feel like I was waiting forever for this chapter(I know it was only a week). But it's been a while where I actually read all the parts in a muti-pairing fic without just skiping to the Wufei parts. You make all the boys interesting and you keep them in character very well, that I 'm actually reading the fic from beginning to end. I even went back to the frist part and read all the way through. Maybe that's why I can't wait for an update with this fic. It's really great. I can't wait to see more soon.
| Reviewed By: MrChristie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2007 00:48 PDT
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Ah, where to begin? First off, the Barbie-Relenas both horrified and terrified me in equal measure. Partly because I could actually see merchandizing companies doing that, but mostly because I have a complete hatred that borders on rabid loathing for Relena. Which isn't to say that I don't see her strong political power and her rather unique character (a strange dichotomy of strong, independant woman and whining, blubbering female). I can tolerate her as long as she has a relevant and pertinant place in the plot. (Which is *NOT* to walk in on Heero and Duo screwing like bunnies so the author can make her have a hysterical screaming fit of titanc proportions!) Although, that doesn't mean I have to like her. Or Shaun for that matter. I think were I Wufei, I'd have kicked the little snot through the filing cabinets just for the satisfaction of seeing him in too much pain to open his mouth. Could always apologize to Sally later. Er, back to the review... I'm relieved to see that all isn't well with Duo, Heero and Wufei because if they had had some magical epiphany where suddenly everything was all peaches and light because the power of love would make things all better and they would never fight and they would stare deeply and longingly into each others' eyes and they would take long walks on the beach and- *slaps self* yeah, if any of that (including the run-on sentances) had happened, then I would have been mourning the death of a wonderful story. You're doing a good job of keeping it real, what with people feeling resentful and left out. I hope it takes Duo more than just a boot... er... finger up the ass to make him get over his rape, it's a serious thing. But I have faith. This has been a way too long review so I'll cut it off with just one more thing. That 'Lightning Barbie' crack made laugh so hard I almost cried. XD ~Mr.Christie
| Reviewed By: CrimsonSin On: September 27, 2007 17:10 PDT
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Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
| Reviewed By: CrimsonSin On: September 24, 2007 19:09 PDT
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Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
| Reviewed By: MrChristie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 02:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Muahaha! Once again the first to review. You've no idea how happy I was when I saw a new fic with your name on it. I'm thrilled that you're continuing this story, as you always do such a good job of writing creatively while keeping the boys in character. The dialogue between Catherine and Quatre made me laugh. You are one of the only writers in existance who can actually make me like Quatre as a person, and for that you should be commended. I can't express enough how happy I am that you seem to see Quatre for what he really is. He is a strong person. He may have regretted the needless waste of life, but he didn't hesitate to kill. He defied up to his father to protect the colonies. He fought and won a war while hopelessly outnumbered. Yet almost everyone seems to see him as some sort of whining, blubbering female with a penis. It cheers me to read your characterization of Quatre. Inherent empathy with steel determination and solid character. He's nice, but he's not a doormat. Basically it all boils down to 'ZOMG, Quatre grew a spine!' It's also nice to see a Quatre with some independence from Trowa instead of acting like some pathetic parasite. Ok, that's it for my Quatre rant, I swear. Much accolades and praise to you, the first chapter was great and I look forward to many happy chapters more of reading with this sequel. Keep 'em comin'! ~Mr.Christie
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