| "Hopes and Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hanyou Mage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey the part you added is a good closer for the chapter. Good job Peter. let me know when you get to the point with my characters. don't forget to tell everyone they are not your characters, and if they want to find out more about Kimiko, Rukai, Amber, or, Sankura to read my story that should be up soon. font color Font Size
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story please update soon.
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Reviewed By: inukagluv [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 14:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a good story. I can't wait for more. Naruto and Sakura forever.
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