| "Hopes and Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hanyou Mage [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 14:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chapter.
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Title: i remember!!!!
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 08:25 CST
Comment/Review:
i read this before like last month!! it was SOO good!!! i guess i 4got...oh and thanx 4 the comment!! update soon!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Hanyou Mage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was great keep at it.
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chapter and very good cliffhanger and I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 13:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chapter please update soon.
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Title: yeah
Reviewed By: Hanyou Mage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 01:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the most suspenseful chapter you have written. I approve. It was the best chapter yet. Later
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 08:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an awesome chapter I love it are they really going to extract the Kyubi from Naruto please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chapter update soon.
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Title: good chapter
Reviewed By: Hanyou Mage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really think you caught her personality almost dead on good job Naruto1217. any way I should have my next chapter of The Other Hanyou up soon as well as my New story Last of The Clan by Me Hanyou Mage. hope you will enjoy the story Naruto1217. latter see you at the College. Later.
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a cliffhanger they have captured Naruto poor Sakura and you know what this is what Im expecting to see in the manga they will capture Naruto please update soon
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Title: Good job
Reviewed By: Hanyou Mage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! enter new characters created by me Hanyou Mage :) :) :) :) :) :) this story make me Happy. keep them coming.
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chapter update soon.
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Reviewed By: Hanyou Mage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey the part you added is a good closer for the chapter. Good job Peter. let me know when you get to the point with my characters. don't forget to tell everyone they are not your characters, and if they want to find out more about Kimiko, Rukai, Amber, or, Sankura to read my story that should be up soon. font color Font Size
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story please update soon.
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Reviewed By: inukagluv [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 14:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a good story. I can't wait for more. Naruto and Sakura forever.
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