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Title: Ultra coolnes chappie review
Reviewed By: Arry(aka Sex Goddess) On: January 13, 2008 18:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very intense! Whew can't wait for more. I really wan't you to explain her beast or whatever it is but I guess you will on your own time.The plan is getting better and better man I love this story hehe. I'm actually finally updating my story today too I hope you read it. Well UWUC. Loves Arry
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 17:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was ok. just that y did hojo have to come and mess things up? y couldnt he have just oh i dont know. dated momoko. she's a bitch. he's a .... uh... nice guy? ( whispers- he's a weirdo..) oppisites attract. and im still happy that kikyo died. -victorydance- finnally! someone actually killed her!!!!!! -stops dancing- everytimew she dies she comes back to life. it makes my life as a kikyo hater soooo much more difficult. update soon k? ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: January 13, 2008 17:17 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alas! Another Cliffee to keep me on my toes... hehe..! Bravo! I love this cliffy. Did Kags fall on the blade? Will she get more of Sess' Youki in order to heal it quickly? Will it then cause her to change even faster? I am most definately a cat right now who is about to become the favourite snack item for a dog named curiosity. LOL. You have fun with cliffys don't you? Aww. But that is okay because you do it so that we kinda know you are gonna do it... ^.^ I am glad to help with your up-and-coming stardomm.. "All hail the Queen, Sunset Miko".... Ahem.. I mean... yeah... *wink* anyhoo.. Chao!
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Title: great cliffie
Reviewed By: Yashaslove On: January 13, 2008 15:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh...Sessh is going to be pissed!! Great cliffie. But i'm dying here! Please update soon...today even :) A girl can dream.
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 14:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Somehow I get the feeling Kaede has one of them looking glass-thingies herself. How else would she know so much? But if that is so, then the question arise on what connection she has to Kagome's parents... I'm really curious about what will happen when all is done with Kouga's pack. Like Kaede said, what will happen when he figures it out? And I can't wait to see what will happen with poor Hojo. XD
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 14:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is getting better and better. I get so excited when I open my mail and see another update from you. I love all the mystery surrounding the transformations Kagome is going through. I can't wait to figure out what exactly is going on with her. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: January 10, 2008 22:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I nominated you for the dokuga awards =.* I hope you get it!!! You deserve it. Your portrayals of the main characters are très magnifique... n'est pas? I hope you win that way your ever-growing fan club will increase and then you can take over the world... *cue evil laugh* mewaahhahahahha... mewahahahah,,, *cough...cough...* meweahhahahaha.. I loved this chapter. I was slapping my forhead at miroku and sango with the kouga chapter... I happened to be drinking my organic soy milk at the time and ended up almost squirting it up my nose Q_Q hehehe !!! happy writing!!! oh, and I will gladly send you our snow.. But I believe it will leak on the way down...hmmm.. Thats too bad, I would have liked to see your face if a semi showed up and dumped a truck load of snow on your front lawn !!! hehehe..... I am so evil... Snowmen,,, in florida *ppssstttt... You are in florida right?* ..hmm...where are you again? some place hot right? or else that joke just blew up in my face!! hahahehhe.. *hic* anywhooo.... JaNe!! InuPriestess
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Title: If it's Victoria's Secret, why does she have a store in the mall?
Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 21:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snicker* Once again I'm sitting in front of my computer giggling out loud reading. Bravo! I'm really glad to see the Kouga pranks begin. Poor Shippou, trying to keep a straight face while Kouga gropes him. I think the funniest part is Mirouku... he's such a perv, he just HAD to compare. I really enjoyed this chapter. As far as our hero and heroine, the mall scene was priceless. :)
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: January 10, 2008 20:11 EST
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That was a wonderful chapter. I'm glad we finally got to the day Kouga's comeuppance started. That first phase was so funny. I can't wait to see what happens next. The shopping trip was fun too. Sessy-poo might as well get used to guys wanting Kagome. At least Kyo doesn't seem to live in a pink unicorn world like someone else we know. Keep up the fantastic work on this. I eagerly look forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 18:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, the pranks are getting started! :D I wonder what they'll do to him next. And I wonder how long he'll be out. Poor thing...
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Title: 69 (oohh kinky maybe a sess kag postion in the near future hehe) Review
Reviewed By: Arry(aka Sex Goddess) On: January 10, 2008 11:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was too cute! I most say I love the shoppingness with kag and sess it's just something about that is romantic when it comes to them especially in Victoria's Secret! hehe soo sexy can't wait for another lime and remember sesshy can't stop her next time you had kags say so herself and sess agreed. heheehe I do love kagome's exploring and with free reign!? mmm *ficgams* galore lol And the prank was ingenious can't wait for more but I have to admit I can't stand how kouga acts but knowing kouga has a big one puts not so clean thoughts in ppl's heads makes me ponder things I don't want to ponder I mean come on it's KOUGA! Ewwww lol But it's funny anyways. Can't wait for more!!! UWUC LOves Arry
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Reviewed By: Kimiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 09:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A few tense problems but overall I have ENJOYED what I have read so far. Very nice. I love a good Kag/Sess story. It's not enough of them. You definitely have good taste. ^^ Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 03:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an awesome update! I laughed so much from the prank they pulled on Kouga! I can't believe that Shippo kept his composure after being groped by that nasty wolf! He is really starting to act like a real fox demon with this trick! I think that's cool about Miroku being a good photographer. It makes perfect since with him being a monk... and one who seems to appreciate his vision. I think you know the paragraphs of elaborate explanation I hinted at there. There were a lot of other cool things (like the mall trip) that I would like to comment on, but I have some things I need to do and I don't want to put off my comment, otherwise I will not remember to.
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 20:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute. sesshy dosent understand a thing and kag's helping him. so sweet. try to update soon. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 16:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, it's gonna be nice to see what happens on the mall. :) Will they perhaps bump into a certain mad boy? Or a certain slut? Ooh, the possibilities! :D Man, this is gonna be one long fanfic! I'm guessing it's gonna be over 100 chapters. Ooh, but don't we all love a good long story? :)
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