| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: sugar0o [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 18:17 EST
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yanno... Kouga's just as thick headed as Hojo, maybe their related.
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Reviewed By: sugar0o [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 18:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i'm still hooked! merry holiday and all if you don't get a chance to update before then, actually i love this story i don't think i'll ever get tired of it. its just s0o0o0o0o interesting. I can't wait to see what Sess does to Hojo to get him to not be so obsessed with Kags, i also can't wait to see what the kids and yasha do to the wolves, and what kags and sess do to them. I have this feelings alls going to go fantastic, but then kouga's gunna loose it and get the pups all messed up and then kags'll go ape-shyt for hurting her kids. that would be fantastic. i'm just so utterly in love with this story. as always wonderful job - r0o
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Reviewed By: SexyLips [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 18:11 EST
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OOHH MY GOD!!!!!!!!! This is SOOOOO Good! I cant wait for the next chappie, hehehe hobo is gonna get it LOL, ya know i kinda feel bad for mokomoko?? did i spell it right, poor thing, hopefully she can find happiness, maybe with hojo??? that would be kinda sweet. Anyway, love it, live it and i breath off of your story, i will be holding my breath untill your next update.....please dont wait too long!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL
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Title: syoze
Reviewed By: syoze [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 17:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok im guessing its like 5pm in the states, well its almost 7am thursday here. why am i up so early u say? well this is one of those 'participate & learn' eco lodges. my job u ask? im attending to horses. y? i like horses & i didnt want to make sushi for breakfast, cant stand the smell of fish in the morning. well the dsl is cool but to get hot water u have to put wood in the furnace thingy & its just wierd. well anyway im leaving in 2 days saturday here, friday in the states to return to tokyo. yes im leaving fresh air & even fresher food (the pig i saw the 1st day we got here, i ate him 4 dinner 2 nights ago)for a smog infested over crowded city. anyway great chapter & im glad hojo will be getting his ass kicked by sesshomaru. & i know its for 'creative' purposes but could you not insult lord sesshomaru? i dont find him to be any of those things. um let the game begin kids are going to terrify koga cant wait til next chpater one love syoze p.s. its cold here we might even get some snow be4 i leave
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 16:24 EST
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Nyeh. I really can't wait for what the kids are going to do to Kouga. And Hojo! OMG I think I just about died when I read the part about him following Sesshoumaru and Kagome. XD I hope he pees his pants. That was mean. Anyways, I'm so unbelievably happy because Drivers Ed ends tonight!! I just have to pass the test and I'm good to go! ^-^ Anywho, please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Sunset Love On: December 19, 2007 16:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1st-ASS is back up and you are able to post if you were not aware. 2nd-Your story gets better and better with every chapter and i am really looking foward towards the next chapter. I will admit you have me stumped with the title a bit. I hope that you will be able to post the next chapter up tommrow hopefuly. I cant wait to see what Sesshoumaru does to Hojo(man is he stupid, my opinion but you can disagree) Please dont keep me waiting. I am looking foward to the chapter that i asked you to do on Dec 28, my birthday. GAMBATE
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 14:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, sorry I seem to blab on and on about Resident Evil. The games are part of the horror, action & shooting genre. Have you seen the movies? The movies are kinda based on the games but... You know I should just do the whole asking to be your friend on myspace thing instead of talking about video games here. Sorry once again. Gee, I wonder what Sesshoumaru is going to say to Hojo. Hojo is just plain creepy! You know he kinda reminds me of Kouga. They both are hell bent on trying to convince themselves and others that Kagome secretly wants them huh. Poor Sesshy he has Hojo to deal with in Kagome's time and Kouga to deal with in the feudal era. But hopefully the pups and Yasha will deal with Kouga soon, right? I'm anxiously awaiting the fun! Until next time ^_^
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Title: ch 60
Reviewed By: mysesshou (not logged in) On: December 19, 2007 10:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My mom was rear-ended back in April. Her neck still hurts and makes work difficult. She hasn't settled on the insurance dollar amount yet because who knows how much money she will need before it stops hurting. Hope your mother will be okay soon. What a great fic! I'm so glad they don't instantly fall in love and the fic is over in five chapters. I can't believe how you authors do it. I had to write a 60 page paper on a circuit board process and it was sooo hard to do. I applaud all writers for their skill and effort! ~MySesshou
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Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai On: December 19, 2007 05:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The pups, Shippo, and Rin were absolutely adorable in their planning and scheming. Hilarious. Can't wait to read as their plans are put into action. I feel so sorry for Sesshoumaru. The poor guy is having sex with no completion. Since Kagome is still "technically" a virgin, she doesn't know what she's missing. The shower scene was awsome EXCEPT for one thing. I don't think I need explain further. Even I'm beginning to feel sexually frustrated! Could someone please tell me what is a wifebeater besides a jerk beating on his wife? I keep coming across that word for an ZKUXitem of clothing in several stories. I just know it's some kind of "shirt". I think that is such a sick name to give to a piece of clothing. Evidently the fashion designer who came up with that terminology must have a few screws loose. Sorry, I digressed from the story but oh how I hate that word. Anyway, I'm on pins and needles for the next update to read his reactions to his first visit to a mall and the childrens revenge (that includes Inuyasha).hehe
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 22:38 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel much better now that Sesshoumaru has received some well deserved relief. I don't know why I was fussing over that, keeping score I suppose. I felt Sessy was being slighted.
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 22:16 EST
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fabulous shower scene!!!! merry christmas!
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Title: review for you
Reviewed By: Arry On: December 18, 2007 21:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehe twas another great chappie and whoo was this lime freakin hott might have to take up your suggestion and invest in some plastic lol Hope she looks down next time hmm. And I shall be sending out destiny's gift and card this week sometime look for it hehe. update soon can't wait tll the shopping scene wonder how kags is going to control her Beast and if she'll realze she actually has one now and the tricks of the kids too cute can't wait but must lol see you soon Loves Arry
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: December 18, 2007 11:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what will happen now. After their little bathing session. The children and Inuyasha are getting along just fine. I wonder will they also trick Kouga's friends as well since they didn't really want to be there in the beginning. I just wonder how the plan will go after they set it. Ohh, this is just getting to good. Now Sesshoumaru and Kagome are going out shopping. I wonder how that will turn out. When I got to the end of the chapter I was like it can't be over with yet. It was just getting to the good part. That ending just left me hanging, but I liked it. Now I have to keep reading to see if you update because this is getting to good. Can't wait for the next chapter. I know that it will be good.
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 10:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A really nice chapter! Can't wait for the next chapter where we see Sesshoumaru do Tokyo! :D
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Reviewed By: BluEyedTigress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 01:34 EST
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Happens to me all the time. Especially when I read a book or story that has different accents or lots of emotion in it. Quite interesting, indeed, mi laddie. Not much in the way of acc-scents tonigh', but I jus' couldn' help meself, now then coul' I? Yet anoddir gr-ate read, mi darlin'. Must be off, ner'... I kin almos' say, Top of Da Mornin' ta yas!
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