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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 17:16 EDT
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I'm sorry you had a bad day today. =( It was a great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 15:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just had the experience of laughing my ass off while shuddering in disgust and feeling slightly nauseated. I'm sure that you know what part of the chapter I am talking about… I don't know if I want a Jaken squeezie toy anymore… I loved the whole chapter. It was really a great read and I am glad that Inuyasha didn't have as much fun as Sesshoumaru... that would have been uncomfortable. I so adore those hip stripes... Inuyasha's ears are extremely cute, but those stripes can be described as nothing less than sexy and that may not be strong enough of a word. I hope the rest of your day goes better and that tomorrow is great. Nothing can ruin a day quite like spilling somethign on a keyboard... I liked the explanation of mokomoko. It makes sense. You definitely have me looking forward to the next chapter! See you tomorrow!
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 14:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, I'm sorry you're having a bad day. Good chapter, I really enjoyed it!
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 18, 2007 19:13 EDT
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Amazing! I love it. I can't wait to see what will occur next!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 18:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I really didn't know what to expect for the battle seen. I think it was perfect. Every part of it was perfect. I didn't really think that Kagome was going to walk away like that, but it couldn't have bee any other way. The scene where the kids went and fetched her was really sweet. I'm betting that the next chapter will be quite interesting. There it seems that there is a lot of potential in the next chapter, but I have the feeling that there is only one way things could turn out from where it was left and I really have no idea what it is. I can hardly wait to find out! Ahh, I don't know what is going to happen because I don't know what anyone is thinking except Kagome! Well, I can think of some things that they might be thinking, like Sesshoumaru's reaction to Kagome's bathing suit... I will be so happy when you pos the next chapter! I can't wait to kind out what will happen... and if Kagura will crash the party...
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: October 18, 2007 17:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read chapter 31 and I must say that it was a very good fight. I would have thought that the mokomoko was Sesshoumaru's tail but that can work to. I wonder how it moves on its own. Maybe because if Sesshoumaru's power. Ohhh I wouldn't have thought of Kagome walking off when they were hurt. Though that did come to a surprise to me but I liked it. At least the pups went out and looked for her. You can tell that they really care about her and want her as a mom. I hope Kagome can see that. Jaken needs to get over himself, thinking that Sesshoumaru is under a spell. I hope that Kagura reaches them in time before Naraku finds out. Though I don't like her all that much, she just wants to be free. I wonder what would happen while they are at the springs. I'm thinking that it would take awhile before Sesshoumaru and Kagome find out they like or love each other. I just can't wait. From the looks of things it would seem like it would be a Inuyasha, Sesshoumaru, and Kagome thing. I hope that it is a Sesshoumaru and Kagome thing. Just that just likes Inu as a brother or friend. Anyways, I can't wait for the bath scene cause I want to know how they would react. Ohh just getting to good. I know that you will make the next chapter even better. I can't wait. When I had saw that you had seen you wrote a chapter very early I was like I can't wait to get home and see what you written next. Hope to see the next chapter soon. I know that it will be good.
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 17:20 EDT
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You do have a point there. I didn't think of the mental connection. I'm hooked. Thanks for the well-wishing on my... crush... >
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Reviewed By: Chas On: October 17, 2007 23:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad I found your story. I absolutely love your plot and your characters are oh so lovely. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: Lil Rini On: October 17, 2007 19:41 EDT
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Wow. A chapter a day on one of the better stories. That's rare. :) Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 17, 2007 18:12 EDT
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that is soooo cute!! she licked his hand. wow she sounded incredibly like me at that moment. I love to do that to a male who decided to "shut" me up by putting his hand over my mouth. Its cute and gets there attention extremely quick. Thank goodness the fight is tomorrow i can't wait for it!
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Title: ohhh
Reviewed By: Monk-MIko On: October 17, 2007 16:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting really good. I had read chapters 29 and 30 and I must say. WOW. Those chapters were great. I should of guessed that Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru would fight for alpha. That was a cute scene with the pups and Kagome. Kagome is starting to act like a real mother to the pups and Rin. This is just getting really good. Sesshoumaru was sure surprised about the pen. I think that it was a good gift for him because he is a lord and everything. I wonder what would happen if or when Sesshoumaru can go to Kagome's time. Chapter 30 was a surprise. I liked it though. You did really good. Ohhh Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha are going to fight. I can't wait for that part. I know that you will make it really good. I still can't believe that sweet little Kagome would do something like that. But it still was good how Sesshoumaru acted from that. When Inuyasha said all those things I was like ohh that is so sweet, but I was also thinking that is he still in love with her or is he just possessive of her cause he doesn't want her to leave him. Now they are going to fight and I can't wait to see that. I know that it will be good, really good. Ohh and I see that you put this chapter up early, can't wait to see if you will do it again. I hope to have another chapter soon cause I just can't wait for it again. Ohhhh just getting to good.LOL
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Reviewed By: starfury On: October 17, 2007 14:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awe oh yes I do feel special :) I love it when you post :)
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 14:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, the dentist wasn't that bad, but I really stressed over it because I didn't know what to expect. This chapter was definitely good enough to excuse the cliffie! I feel like the intensity of the emotions really came though in this chapter. It was a necessary step before the actual battle. I should have thought of that too, but that's why your the author and I am the fan! I almost cried after Inuyasha's speech. I am glad that the brother's can speak to each other as they did even without the explanation of he past to heal wounds. It is a really good thing that Kagome and Kazue had their talk. I know if I was Kagome, I would have felt exactly the same way. I would also have licked Sesshoumaru's hand! :D And... shielded him from further... explanation. Somehow, you have not only turned Kagome into yourself, but into me as well! Well, frankly I don't think you changed her that much(from cannon), except made her a little more mature, but such events are bound to mature someone! Actually... Cannon Kagome would NEVER lick anyone's hand and then tease them too... but like I said, I think it was a natural enough progression. At first I was wondering how Sesshoumaru could get his hand on Kagome's mouth and make it unmovable without the added leverage of pulling her against his chest, but then I remembered that he has a big hand and super demon strength. I think anyone who could toss a Samurai fifty feet through the air into a river without so much as shifting their body weight around in the slightest is kind of beyond things such a s leverage... Wow Inuyasha... is definitely the embodiment of courage when you remember that little tidbit! It is obvious that Inuyasha knows he is going to loose otherwise the brotherly talk would have been a lot different. It seems like this battle is serving the purpose to not only save face(Inuyahsa's), but also to test Inuyasha's worth as a beta. Sesshoumaru isn't unwise enough to let Inuyasha's worth be wasted. He sort of has already proved his worth as beta, but he has never served as such and let's not forget the all important saving of face... We wouldn't want Sess to seem sentamental! I can see that Jaken would never intentionally betray his master, but he is just getting so extra disgruntled... I suppose he would be to cowardly to do something like that even if he thought it in his master's best interest. I have noticed that the pups each have their own personality. Yoshi's is coming out more lately, because he is getting more face time in the story, but not so much that he seems to be played as favorite. It would be weird to develop each one right away, so that is why I havn't bothered to try to memorize which name goes with which personality and where in the birth order they are. I figured they will all be developed a little here and there and I will eventually learn their names. During their introduction, you laid a foundation for each of their personalities anyway, which is perfect. Oh, I love the title of the chapter! lol so perfect! Well, I look forward to tomorrow as always!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 01:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome chapter! I loved how Sesshoumaru reacted to the gifts. I also love how Kagome chewed out Inuyasha and sat him in front of everyone! I'm glad that she didn't sit him a billion times. I hate it when she does that. One is good enough especially in front of so many people. **sigh** I hate sit abuse... Jaken abuse is much more satisfying! It almost looks like Jaken is hating this wole thing with Kagome enough to betray Sesshoumaru... I hope not, that will just end up with one very permanantly squished Jaken. I see Kagome didn't get a chance to see if Kirara and Kazue liked their treats because someone had to open his big mouth and start something, which I hope to see finished in the next chapter since some evil author chose to leave us hanging. **tapps fingers loudly on the counter** I would be really iritated if I didn't know that I can count on a new chaper tomorrow.... ok, no I wouldn't this chapter is to good for a little cliffhanger to cause an upest over, Really I am suprer excited about this and the next chapter, my mood has more to do with my dentist apointment I had today... Where are those Jaken squeezies!?!?!?! AHHHHH! OH, one thing I just remembered, I am starting to love Yoshi so much! He's too cute and smart! He seems to have all of adult male's good features with an extra dolip of mini-Sessh cuteness on top! I thnk it is so awesome that Kagome and all the kids slept in a huge puppy pile! Someone should have taken a picture... Hmmm.... pictures... Ok, I am goign to go even further off topic if I keep this up. I look forward to tomorrow!
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Reviewed By: starfury On: October 16, 2007 22:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooooooooooo dun dun duhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh what is going to happen next... hahahaha you have to wait and see :*( *sniff sniff* plase hurry :)
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