| "Circle of Betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: whimsy007 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why is InuYasha always the culprit? Kagome can never make a mistake?
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 07:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
yea sad at the end.... but none of the less I LOVE IT!!! great job
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... kinda sad in the end but understandable with everything that had happened... really liked it though... good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 04:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow Inuyasha cried!!! awwww TOO CUTE!
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Reviewed By: kirarakat55 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter! I can't wait for the epilogue even if it will not be happy.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
nice updates... at least they all came clean and found out of what the other did... i get what you're saying that there can't really be a happy ending with everything that's happened betweem all of them... (and it's your story after all)... but glad that inuyasha & kagome are back together... also miroku & sango too... looking forward to your epilogue... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 17:52 CDT
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this is great update soon i love it
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow Inuyasha and Sango? well i guess we all saw that coming :P but hmmm will Kagome forgive him that easily? knowing you how you write this, she wont take him back without a fight XD i seriously cant wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... inuyasha should go to kagome and talk... and sango goes back to miroku and talk also... they all need to be honest with each other... and more trusting with one another... hope in the end it's a happy ending... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 03:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshy is mine... but im almost waiting for my Sesshy aswell XD make Inuyasha walked on them!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 03:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshy is mine... but im almost waiting for my Sesshy aswell XD make Inuyasha walked on them!!!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
nice update... who will it be with kagome next... she went through the well... and seems that the next ones might be inuyasha & sango... hope inuyasha gets really guilty and realizes what cycle he started... hope he goes after kagome... and sango goes back to miroku... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 20:37 CDT
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Oh the webs that keep getting weaved, lol. From one to another, to another... I'm waiting for The Great Lord of the Western Lands to make his appearance pretty soon, lol. Greta update, short, but good none the less. Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... that was really mature what kagome did for ayame & kouga... glad that kagome is still aware eventhough her emotions are messed up... what is inuyasha's thoughts... will this still be an inuyasha/kagome pairing... wonder what happens next... will this be a short chapter story... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kirarakat55 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2007 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing! Poor Kagome, Inuyasha is always screwing up the best thing for him. Ah... oh well, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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