| "Phoenix Rising" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
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Reviewed By: Runishie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 08:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, i know this is almost three years after you posted the story and I must say it was a very good find on my part, You'll have alot more readers of it if I have any say in this, if you even check this kind of thing anymore or not.
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Reviewed By: audi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 21:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting beginning, that's all i can say, i'm only on chapter four, na no da. It's developing nicely.
i don't know if you've since changed it, but 'watashi no' is the standard way to say 'my' however i believe that Score would probably use a different form of the pronoun 'I' (because the Japanese are difficult and like to have more than one). i think he'd probably be an 'ore'. Also, 'kokoro' is probably a better term to use for 'heart' ('Mai' is a word you use to... uh... siginify a flat object, like paper). So 'ore no kokoro' would be what i would think... If you'd like a further explination of how i got to that, my contacts are in my profile. |
Reviewed By: Phire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 23:47 CST
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plz finish this story, its really great and im afraid im stuck on it. thanx ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Aleiah On: February 20, 2003 10:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read some of this last year and am quite happy to see more. Ohhhh you have got to do something about Ryu. He is a VERY SICK MAN. And the way you describe his mind, that was just creepy. I'm lovin' this story and am ready to read more. Great detail and I can't wait for Phoenix's reaction to Score's story! |
Reviewed By: BadWarriorGrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 14:25 CDT
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hey luvd the updates. whens the next due? cant wait! ^_- |
Reviewed By: Celeste [BadWarriorGrrl] On: August 20, 2002 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its about time ya posted these ^_- *lol ne wayz i really like this story. cant wait to read more |
Reviewed By: BadWarriorGrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2002 22:05 CDT
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jus wanderin if ur ever gunna finish this fic. i really like and am waitin for the rest :P *gets down on knees and begs* PWEASE!? |
Reviewed By: Celeste [BadWarriorGrrl] On: June 28, 2002 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i luv this story! u HAV to write sum more! i luv the caracters and the whole thing is jus plain great! plz write more |
Reviewed By: Phlie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 09:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, man! This is awesome! Phoenix is meeting him...that's too cool! I love this fic! |
