| "Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story1!!!
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Reviewed By: inu-geri On: December 08, 2007 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOHHHH!!! (dances around with glee) I'm so glad I was right. I have read Anne Bishop's stories thousands of times. I'll probably start reading it again while I wait for the rest of your story. This is just fabulous!!! Please keep going.
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Reviewed By: inu-geri On: December 08, 2007 17:55 CST
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oh...I know that I am gonna love this story...it is similar to a series of books that I simply adore by Anne Bishop. can't wait for the rest.
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Reviewed By: texy On: November 10, 2007 16:08 CST
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This story is so amazing! I can't wait for more chapters!!
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2007 04:37 CDT
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I love this story. I just opened it a little bit ago, but I definitely will keep reading. In fact, I think I'll go to the library tomorrow and check out the series; I'm a sucker for a good fantasy novel. It'll be something to read on the train to my mom's place. God the train ride is boring as all get-out. And your summary doesn't suck, by the way. Personally, I'm always intrigued by a summary that indicates a non-embarrassingly-weak Kagome. Also, it's succinct and doesn't contain any awful spelling/grammar/capitalization errors. I never even bother opening stories that have errors like that. If an author can't proofread a two-sentence summary, then the story itself is bound to be a good hundred times worse or so. So don't give up writing because of the lack of response. Keep slugging through, because you've got something good here. ~Xaenthe
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... really like it so far... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: 2nd chapter
Reviewed By: rising-maiden [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 14:14 CDT
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I reminded myself initially that this story was set in an AU and that many characters could possibly be OC because I found myself growing angry with Kagome's mother. However, I understand that many are afraid of what they do not know and her mother would be no different in this situation. Also Kagura seems quite calm in a sort of understanding way. I like this softer side of her. You are truly capturing the personality traits I believe each character would take on in this world. And just in my opinion - It is always a good quality of a writer to evoke emotion from the reader. Emotion of any kind, actually. Well done. I'll be reading...
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Title: Well written
Reviewed By: rising-maiden [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I only had the opportunity to read chapter one but I am stimulated by what I have read to continue. You have created an evolving framework from which to develop a truly remarkable story. I have not read the story you sited in you A/N but I just might take the time out to do so. I will be reading…
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Reviewed By: mylia_blue [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't understand how you have gone with so few reviews as of yet. This if finely written. I am so intrigued and wish I had more time today to continue reading. I am usually quite the harsh reviewer but I was engrossed by your story the moment I opened it up. Great flow, even when I was unsure of the speaker, I was found myself frantically trying to determine "who." I have not had the opportunity to read the series from which you idea has grown but I am sure the story must be interesting just from this glimpse in the first chapter. I will definitely continue reading. ~DdURdTht~
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Reviewed By: lessie On: October 03, 2007 21:52 CDT
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This story Rocks! Please update soon!! I can't wait to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: angel_of_hope [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 18:41 CDT
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Great story so far. I can't wait to read the next chapter. :]
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Reviewed By: Jaenelle Angeline [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 11:57 CDT
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I absolutly love the story and i cant wait for the next chapter especially since The Dark Jewels are some of my favorite books. The story goes along just great.
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Reviewed By: Rhiaonna_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 09:46 CDT
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O.O oh no, your sending her to meadowbrook...... omg your not gonna do that are you????? because that was just tramatizing in the other one. oh man i hope not, any way it's a great story and i can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rhiaonna_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 09:34 CDT
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OMG!!!!!! i love it, it's just an awsome first chapter. right now i'm about halfway through Queen of Darkness for the hundrenth time. i can't wait to go and read more.
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