| "To Choose a Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: bookworm182 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 15:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please continue the story. It is getting really interesting
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Reviewed By: Honebars On: October 15, 2007 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ I have to asy this is a really nice start. I can only hope you will write more of this something. If so I look forward to reading it.
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Reviewed By: Shadow Nite [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, this might sound weird, but the way you've portrayed the characters thus far, I think Kagome should be with both Huni and Mori, but if you don't do threesomes, just mori. I say those two because mori would be her rock, someone who is there for her when she needs it and Huni would be there for her when she has her bouts of fun loving childishness. Plus the three of them together would be unbeatable. As for Haruhi but her eaither with the twins (as in both because I really can't wee them not sharing anything) or with Kyoya. The twins will either bring out her more mischievousness side, or she'll bring out Kyoya's humanity lol. Whatever you do, please don't put her with tamaki, he's too much like her dad. I see him as a part of her family... the annoying older brother noone wants to claim in public.
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Reviewed By: kiki chan On: October 06, 2007 16:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
lacks abit in detail but over all a pretty good story. i look forward to an update :)
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Reviewed By: wild 1 On: October 05, 2007 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i vote haruhi/Tamaki and Kaoru/Kagome ^_^
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Reviewed By: ~~ On: October 05, 2007 14:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok this looks like it's gonna be funny lol, i wonder how tamaki sempai's gonna react when he learns kagome is a girl :) lookin good so update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dragonpink2002 On: October 05, 2007 12:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet!!...Can't wait for more =^.^=
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 11:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
This looks like it could be a good story! I can't wait to see what comes next! Please update again soon!
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Kage Otome On: October 04, 2007 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Tor, Me again, I just decided to review here in case you didn't get it on AFF, the site is kinda screwy. I love this and can't wait to see where you go with this. Will you put youkai in the story to spice things up? Perhaps make a few characters Youkai, like Nekozawa-sempai or something? Keep up the great work! I shall eagerly await the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: T~Chan On: October 04, 2007 11:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heyooo ^_^ i like the story. It's a bit different then your IY/YYH x-overs but this one is so far ok. I look forward to ALL your updates and PLEASE!!! don't wait so long to update your stories again. JA! oh ya ano...i think a Kagome/Kaoru/Hikaru pairing ^_^
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