| "Harry Potter and the Four Guardians" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maaya On: August 25, 2002 03:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so great! I love Duo, hes so cool and I love his relationship with Snape!
Harry's gonna end up with Ginny, ne? I'd love that!
Will Duo ever see Heero,Quatre,Trowa or Wufei again? I hope so! |
Reviewed By: Saturnpyroprincess On: August 25, 2002 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it.Elf you did a great job. The only thing i think you could emprove on is on Hotaru it seems like your not putting much attention on her other wise I love it. and i can't wait for more. its got everything a story needs. oooh please you gotta have Hotaru fighting in her senshi form i really wanna se or read Duo's reation. |
Reviewed By: Keily [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2002 15:46 CDT
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Aw! You mentioned me! Thankies! ^_____^
Hopefully I can finish them because I got like....a bunch of other characters to draw....
Great chapter! Love the Forest-Sirius interaction. ^_____^ Maybe I'll take all the sbtle hints and draw Duo in his really tight dragon hide pants.... |
Reviewed By: Reha On: August 12, 2002 12:49 CDT
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WOOOOOO I READ THE WHOLE THING SO FAR!!! yay for me!! I wanna see cho and harry stay together, no offence to ginny and harry fans. But i think cho and harry make a cute cuple. Oh ya, and i wanna see trunks and setsuna(sp?)HAVE SEX!! lol ^-^ hey, i know its a little late to add new chars, but could you add a goth-punk guy? please? then ginny could fall for him and cho and harry could stay together!.......just a thought..... |
Reviewed By: Reha-Chan On: August 11, 2002 18:59 CDT
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er......scratch my last post for anyone who saw it, i haden't read the entire thing at that point.....actually....i haven't read the hole thing yet.....heh ^-^; |
Reviewed By: Keily [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 13:21 CDT
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Great as usual, Elf-san! ^_~ Oh...guess what....? You finally have fanart! If you check my art gallery, you'll find them right away. They're the first three. Uh...two of them are kinda silly and the last one is....me cheating on Forest's dress, but oh, well...I can't draw roses at all, but anyways. Enjoy! Becuase I WILL draw the others that you have described in your latest chapter in their Yule Ball clothes. ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 12:50 CDT
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NO! your so mean to me :'( now i have ta wait for you to post more to see what Potter does. your so evil you make us wait. well :P to you
ok ok j/k but i really like your fic...and if you cant tell that by now then :P,
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: AngelBulma1 On: August 06, 2002 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, but i found one mistake, and that is you put Ringtail instead of Wormtail. just a little thing, but just wanted to tell u! well, i like this story, and all of the characters, and the story line.
~Amanda~ |
Reviewed By: Kuroi Doragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2002 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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:) |
Reviewed By: Lazy Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2002 13:36 CDT
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It's one of my original favorite AtS lines, actually, and with you bringing in all the Whedon-verse references for this story, I always thought it would be too perfect for Trunks. Glad to see Hotaru finally broke up with Draco, too--I like him, but only because he has the potential to become one of the good guys who's cool because he used to be a bad guy. When he's still playing bad guy I'd like to smack him upside the head. Your point about Duo always being Majorly Important Sidekick Boy (sidekicks always get stuck with "boy" or "girl", ever notice that?) is something I never thought about, but it makes sense. Well, I guess that's about all, so ciao for now! |
Reviewed By: Gie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2002 01:44 CDT
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Ack! You need to reload it under the DBZ category...if I didn't see the entry in the 'newest fics' section, I woudn't have found it, and actually, I missed two chapters! ^_^;;;
I tell ya, you definitely have the saiya-jiin temper down! You should let Trunks-kun slap Malfoy around a bit...tht agression nes to come out a some point...and when Forest thinks they're ready, Duo and Harry should 'try' sparring with Trunks...he'd help them improve, that's for sure. |
Reviewed By: Keily [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2002 18:18 CDT
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Great as usual...and might I add...expect some pictures by Monday. ^____^ I've been on a drawing spree!! ((Well, actually I've just about drawn one picture so far....)) |
Reviewed By: Lazy Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2002 09:03 CDT
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I thought as much, but I wasn't totally sure (It's diamondgirl, switching between ff.n and mm.o). It was one of those times when I felt like holding back in case I was wrong. Eh. And was he gonna say "on my mother's side"? Was Trunks really gonna say it? Even if he wasn't, I'll simply refuse to believe that he wasn't because I think it's just too funny! |
Reviewed By: Reha On: July 31, 2002 15:21 CDT
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DAMN IIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTT SUISIDE BOY IS DEAAAAAAAAAAAAAD!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHH *sniff* I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!*sniff sniff* |
Reviewed By: ColbyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is spiffy :D I like this. Bizzare cross over that works :D
Of course, I'm a yaoi fiend, so I'm not thrilled with the pairings (well, I'll be honest. with pairing Duo with Hotaru. it almost seems cliched... but not.. ^^;;; But that's because Duo is hands down my favorite character, and I like himwith Heero. or Wufei. But that's beside the point, honestly. I'd be just as happy if it were hilde. I supoe one of the reasons I'm not sure I like this pairing is because if they do get together it means that they will either have to seperate and ther will be much sadness, Or Duo will never get back to the GW dimension. I can't bare the thought that Duo never got to say good bye, and plus, the other gboys need him. To win the war and stuff.
*shrugs* But you are the author and the author knows best. Excellent story, I REALLY look forward to seeing where this story will lead in the future. And, baring unjust character death, or truely cruel endings, I know I"ll love it. Well, I'd probably love it anyway. but it wouldn't fit the mood so far.. I think.. but ah-well.
Oh yeah. ther are also a few minor spelling isses and stuff here and there (strait for straight and stuff).. but they don't detract too much from the story (not that I'm one to speak.. but I am half asleep at the moment--It's 5am). Good work. ^-^ |
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