| "Harry Potter and the Four Guardians" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: ColbyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is spiffy :D I like this. Bizzare cross over that works :D
Of course, I'm a yaoi fiend, so I'm not thrilled with the pairings (well, I'll be honest. with pairing Duo with Hotaru. it almost seems cliched... but not.. ^^;;; But that's because Duo is hands down my favorite character, and I like himwith Heero. or Wufei. But that's beside the point, honestly. I'd be just as happy if it were hilde. I supoe one of the reasons I'm not sure I like this pairing is because if they do get together it means that they will either have to seperate and ther will be much sadness, Or Duo will never get back to the GW dimension. I can't bare the thought that Duo never got to say good bye, and plus, the other gboys need him. To win the war and stuff.
*shrugs* But you are the author and the author knows best. Excellent story, I REALLY look forward to seeing where this story will lead in the future. And, baring unjust character death, or truely cruel endings, I know I"ll love it. Well, I'd probably love it anyway. but it wouldn't fit the mood so far.. I think.. but ah-well.
Oh yeah. ther are also a few minor spelling isses and stuff here and there (strait for straight and stuff).. but they don't detract too much from the story (not that I'm one to speak.. but I am half asleep at the moment--It's 5am). Good work. ^-^ |
Reviewed By: ColbyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is spiffy :D I like this. Bizzare cross over that works :D
Of course, I'm a yaoi fiend, so I'm not thrilled with the pairings (well, I'll be honest. with pairing Duo with Hotaru. it almost seems cliched... but not.. ^^;;; But that's because Duo is hands down my favorite character, and I like himwith Heero. or Wufei. But that's beside the point, honestly. I'd be just as happy if it were hilde. I supoe one of the reasons I'm not sure I like this pairing is because if they do get together it means that they will either have to seperate and ther will be much sadness, Or Duo will never get back to the GW dimension. I can't bare the thought that Duo never got to say good bye, and plus, the other gboys need him. To win the war and stuff.
*shrugs* But you are the author and the author knows best. Excellent story, I REALLY look forward to seeing where this story will lead in the future. And, baring unjust character death, or truely cruel endings, I know I"ll love it. Well, I'd probably love it anyway. but it wouldn't fit the mood so far.. I think.. but ah-well.
Oh yeah. ther are also a few minor spelling isses and stuff here and there (strait for straight and stuff).. but they don't detract too much from the story (not that I'm one to speak.. but I am half asleep at the moment--It's 5am). Good work. ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Keily [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2002 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keily: 10 on 10!! Wheeeee!!
Heero: .............
Wufei: .............
Trowa: .............
Quatre: That's so sad!! Poor Ginny!! *sniffles and cries into a hanky*
Trowa,Heero,Wufei: *sweat drop* ............
Keily: Totally cool! Keep it up!! ^__^
Duo: Of course YOU like it.
Keily: Of course! YOU'RE in it!!
Duo: Oh, quiet you.
Keily: Hehehehe...and here I thought I was evil to my characters.
Minni (GW RP charrie): YOU ARE!!
Keily: Gah! How did you get here?!
Sorry...I tend to rant and do stuff like that. ^.^ Great fic and keep it up. I love how you write and love how the story's ending up, too. You are a great fanficker...and may I ask so kindly...may I do some art for some scenes, pretty please? *starry eyes* There are just some scenes too cute to be ignored. Some of them just HAVE to be drawn...and can I ask you what you look like because I'd like to try a piccy.... |
Reviewed By: Lazy Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2002 21:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooh, this is just as yummy as A Shade Darker! I noticed some of the inside jokes, but unfortunately I seem to have missed a few. Le sigh! Maybe next time! But anyway, I saw potential for an Angel reference in Chapter 11 when they found out Trunks is half-Saiyan--instead of the original line, he coulda said "I happen to be very human! On my mother's side..."
Well, I gotsta go now, so I'll check up on this again another day! |
Reviewed By: Sailor Taurus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2002 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i want more now!!! Good cliffhangers!! I'm really impressed. |
Reviewed By: Kim On: July 05, 2002 10:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this fic! I can't wait for more... NOW.... |
Reviewed By: dark Faeri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! I can't wait for more. I luv vampires and stuff. this is an awesome fic! ^.^ I luv the pairings too! |
Reviewed By: Bradhadair On: July 03, 2002 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg omg omg omg OMFRIGGINGOSH!!!! YOU JUST HAD TO STOP THERE!!! WHY??? *falls to her knees and raises hands in the air* WHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYY???? *stands and brushes self off, looks politely up and smiles innocently* please finish this I like it lots! |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 19:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU LIL TURD!!!!!!!!! YOU STOPED RIGHT AT A HIGH POINT!!!! YOUR AS MEAN AS Cartoon Network WITH NEW EPISODES OF DBZ! AAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*in a very horse voice* ok im done,
:)mizu:P
PS. you must post more ASAP |
Reviewed By: SilentWillow920 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 04:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
"After all, if a teenage girl could whale up on vampiric ass, then he sure as hell could." is a reference to Buffy. ;) I have to say, this is the best crossover I have ever read... I might die from withdrawl if I don't see more soon. ;) **fans herself** Woah, is it hot in here, or is it just the bishi-overload? |
Reviewed By: Hotaru Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of your best fanfics ever Elf! I absolutely adore it! PLEASE update and finish this soon...oh yeah...I really love the coupling you've made. :) BYE! |
Reviewed By: L.O. On: June 29, 2002 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are so many fanfics alike nowadays that when I come across a unique story I read it with a passion. There are so many great things going on with this story...please keep on writing! |
Reviewed By: Kim On: June 28, 2002 12:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wouldn't you think Cho would be a bit sad? he doesn't seem to care at all. I'm sensing Wicked Lady here..... Victim to Victim. |
Reviewed By: Kim On: June 26, 2002 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOO! Why can't you just tell us???? Er.. hm... hope you write more |
Reviewed By: SilentWillow920 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2002 17:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you SO much for writing this fic! More Trunks, please ;) (better review to come once I read the rest of the story ;) ) |
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