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| "Strapped" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 01:17 EDT
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this is good. but i wish you would have included stuff about their lives together over 500 years, their relationship with sess, and their meeting with kagome's mom. in other words add several chapters.
| Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 02:09 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Your story was nominated in the category Best Oneshot Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from March 20th 2008 through April 4th 2008 (at midnight). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
| Title: So glad I listened!
Reviewed By: InuAniManiac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 13:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was absolutely amazing and not to mention, FUCKIN' HOT!!! Hell, even the "man-sex" turned me on. That was REALLY good and I'm so glad that you recommended it to me! Thank you, thank you. I know you said that one was somewhat OOC for you, but I honestly can't wait to see what other goodies you have in store in your other works. And yes, I will be rereading Mating Season. I don't remember it being so long when I read it before and it's been so long, I will have to re-read it at this point. But for now, I'll settle for your one-shots. He He 10's across the board for this! WOW, I might have to print this one out and keep it with me. ROFL!
| Reviewed By: JenJenJen On: January 19, 2008 13:09 EST
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Ahhh I love this one!! :D I have to admit, at first I was a bit disturbed by Inuyasha and Sess doing "it"..... but hahahah love how Inu and Kag got together! So cute! And HOT! :D i love your stories. Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 19:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE READ IN A LONG TIME AND I DIDNT GET DISTRACTED BY A BUNCH OF ERRORS LIKE I DO IN OTHER STORYS. YOU ROCK AT WRITING LEMONS TO. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 00:46 EST
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That was pretty funny. Well written and I liked the pokes at authordom. Hehe.
| Reviewed By: gwineveve301 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 01:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! OMG! OMG! Do it again! That was fucking amazing. So well put together. Also the fact that I could read it and not feel like I was grading an english paper! There are not enough words for you other then thank you.
| Reviewed By: Inuluver66613 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 19:23 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It has everything i ever wanted! yaoi, kikyou dead, Inuyasha and Kagome together forever. I love you! lol, I loved the story,
| Reviewed By: Sparkly Faerie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 03:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh... my... God... I don't know what on EARTH possessed me to read this, considering the idea of incest actually makes me rather ill, but I s'pose I'm glad I did... I'll admit I'm still uncomfortable with the SessInu references, but the InuKag lemon was great, lmao! As to the references about inu establishing the pecking order with sex, that kinda grosses me out, too. I am constantly yelling at my dogs for doing just that. -shudder- But, back to the point, there were some places here that really made me laugh. I actually had to stand up and leave at one point to stop myself from laughing too loudly and drawing the attention of my family to just WHAT I was reading -- Mother dearest wouldn't be too happy! :X All in all it was a good read, but not really something I'd read again, like I would the rest of your fics (many of which I've read several times). Keep up all the good work.
| Reviewed By: elementalobsession09 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 04:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was fucking hilarious. Props. I never thought I'd be reading that from your genius, but you've done excedingly well. I, suprisingly, enjoyed that a lot. I try to read out of my norm every now and again and your fic entertained me quite nicely. Ever thought of doing firefighter fic with the inu gang? Just a thought I've been holding for a while. I've never read one before. Considering I've read 'Kagome the doctor' or 'Inu the construction worker' and the like. I've just never read any with the characters put in my job before. I unfortunatly lack the skill to write such a fic, but I thought you would do a lovely job if you decide to take the offer. If not, it's always out there for whoever. But, either way, I hope the best for you and commend you on your superb skill. Thanks for all the effort you put forth for our entertainment. ~Julia, aka- elementaobsession
| Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 14:46 EST
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interesting...but ya gotta love toys! ^_~
| Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 01:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, that was totally awesome! Such originality and style, i'm very impressed. I hope you have some more up your sleeve, because that was great.
| Title: hiya
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 15:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know I love this I don't know why I bother putting down to words. I'm happy your doing new things and I still expect a three yoai out of you in the future. I can say for a fact that If you can get me to read a shippo lemon that you can get me to read Kagome with a strap on. and man that was good. perhaps a threesome can come out of it. lol to bad she could get one that vibers lol how funny would that be. Poor sesshy lost his fuck buddy. and once again thank you for changing but not really mating for life or only one person cause lets face it. Inu's mate whoever where-ever when-ever. thank you for making Kagome a bit more mature and not annoying. and also to Come Hither for making this happen. Shivonne Talk to ya later Huges and Kisses
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 05:24 EDT
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Hmmm. I realize this was meant to be silly, but your writing and characterizations of Kagome and Inu are a little TOO spot-on, and it actually reads like a serious story. Honestly, it seemed very believable that he would go to Sess like that if he thought it would help protect Kagome. And then he got caught up in it. He never really believed it was love, but he wanted to fool himself for a while. Again: believable, and it injected a serious, angsty note to this. And him continuing to be attracted to men, even after being with Kagome, well, ... I could see him just plain 'ole being addicted to the SEX, period, -- he'd never had it before. LOL!! But after experiencing "the real deal" -- love and EVERYTHING, he still craved the other. Just a bit disturbing. (No, a LOT disturbing. LOL!!) And yes, I know that was the point, and Kag got wear a strap-on, and he was faithful to her, in spite of his attraction to men, (was he really attracted to men, or did he just like receiving anal sex?), but it sure seemed like Miroku forced him to it. LOL!! (BTW, why didn't she get one which stimulated HER at the same time, since she thought that was all she could have with him?) I have to confess, I loved the line where he compared it to using the Tesusaiga before he mastered the Wind Scar. That was great! (And of course, everything is fair game in fanfiction, but you do know that the legal age of sexual consent in Tokyo is 17, right? The Japanese National Criminal Law Code is set at 13, but each prefecture has its own laws that govern such behavior, and most of Japan, -- especially the metropolitan areas -- has laws that set it much higher. It's kind of interesting, really, since they have to be 20 to vote or drive. LOL!!) Well, I have to hand it to you: you pulled it off, even though it's a side of Inu most of us don't want to know about. LOL!! It really was a nice bit of writing, but I would expect nothing less from a story with your name on it.
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 03:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my Sesshy was with Inuyasha!?! WOW!!! but then Inuyasha and Kagome..... WOW once again XD Kagome isnt so innocence then i thought she is XD but Eleventh time...... god that must have hurt Kagome lol
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