| "Forbidden Fruit" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 06:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you ^___^ and OMG!!! Kouga!!!! bastard XD and i was waiting for a little action in there ;) lol
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, I'm so totally hooked! Most of the Inuvamp stories I've tried to read just suck....big time! I was never a fan of buffy(the series, I loved the movie tho!) and this is nowhere near that story! *rolls eyes at niave ppl*...anywho, hope you update soon, but if not, I'm a firm believer that anything worth reading is worth waiting for!! Good luck with the next chapter! Can't wait to see how this plays out between them!!!! and after that little lemon teaser, I eagerly look forward to the real deal!!!
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Reviewed By: sailoruniverse On: June 26, 2008 15:47 CDT
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okay you can ignore me saying that the last chap is broken I think it was just my computer messing up....but it is still good.
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Reviewed By: sailoruniverse On: June 26, 2008 15:28 CDT
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this fic has caught my attention; however, the last chapter needs fixed it takes you back to the very beginning fanfic home page. please fix soon so i can read more. it is really good.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 04:41 CDT
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ummm could you fix it?? the words are hidden...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 06:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow im hooked ^___^ and it seems i came at the right time :D
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Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon! I'm dying, I've been waiting for you to update for like three month now!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT chap! i loved reading it! and now i'm in such suspense cause theire finally ganna meet! i wonder what will happen!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE! UR AWESOME!!!
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Reviewed By: jessie6491 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahh, but if that is the case, colleges in alaska sound quite appealing too? don't they? lol. please update soon. i'm love vampire stories, and i'm also a big fan of buffy. but i don't usually read vampire fanfictions. i think you are doing a really good job with this story. i love her "scooby gang" lol. please PLEASE update soon.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: ~Sadie~ On: October 23, 2007 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok you have to update soon thats and EVIL ending lol ^_^ great story btw! Kepp up the great work! ~Sadie~
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Reviewed By: Shyla [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fan fic I have read so far, (and I've read ALOT) PLEASE, please keep writing! I cant wait for Inu and Kagome to finally meet!!!
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Reviewed By: redrose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 16:30 CDT
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I really like it and hope that you add the next chapter soon
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 09:21 CDT
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This was beautiful. I don't care how out of charater they are. Change nothing! Anyone that tells you to alter the characters and/or plot is insane and should be ignored. Inuyasha's monolouge was deep, sweet, and charming. (Who wouldn't want to be stalked by him!) I can't imagine how long it must have taken to tweak it to your liking. It was perfect. Now let's not sell Kagome short. Her POV was nice too. Her's just isn't as deep as his was. But we have to get through the "foundation" of the plot before we can get to the "good stuff". As she grows and the story progresses her POV will be just as deep as his (even if his will always be deeper because he has studied her longer). I think your casting was a bit of a suprise to me. It seems like you took a lot of time to think about the roles. Everyone seems to be cast the role they have for a higher purpose. And I can't thank you enough for having a reasonable situation to have Koga like Kagome and not have him be too overbearing (of course he will explode later but it will be approperiate). Usually people screw it up and it makes me cry because Koga's potential is wasted into making him a catalyst for Inuyasha. Your writing style is indescribable. I love it and I can't explain why. The details...the attention you give to the small things make the big things shine even more. I see where you have planted the seeds for many little subplots. (Or maybe they are part of the big plot?) Makes me wonder if you will have time to nurture them all but I have confidence in you. I know you can juggle them all and still balance the story. It's so hard to write in the first person correctly. I commend you on doing so. Doing it correctly with style takes work and much effort. I want to go on and on about Kagome and Inuyasha's characters but I don't have enough space for that. But I do love what you have done with them. I'm eager to see what you do with them. The only vampire version of Inuyasha I have ever loved was Bloodlust by angelbabe17. I feared it would be the only one too. You have renewed my hopes and banished my fears. Finding a good vampire story is rare. I'm thankful to have found this hidden treasure. Sadly I see this story will be slow going. You can't rush perfection I suppose. So I won't tell you to hurry and update. I will try to remain paticent between posts. Sorry about not being a grammar goddess. I KNOW there are mistakes in here. Before I forget, I know Inuyasha said he was going to up the stakes...did he leave the curtain open on purpose? Is he playing around im her mind "helping" those dreams along? And I'm guessing he can stand sunlight as long as it isn't bright daylight? (I decided to transfer my review since the story was moved also. Hope you don't mind. I didn't change anything...but I want to...)
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