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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 20:52 PDT
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It took him that long to find out that he had Sam's stuff, that's why she wasn't able to call him! Maybe he can just give in and use her phone to call her family. She doesn't have any numbers on save in that, but there's the calls recieved list that would be helpful... unless she deleted them also when she hung up. Kurt really reminds me of Miroku at times. I guess all of the origonals have to be reincarnated some time if they didn't last this long in the first place. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 17:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know If I want any happy chapters for this story because that means that its going to be over soon...
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 17:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew there was a reason she hadn't called yet. I just didn't realize that he had put the cards in his own bag. So, they'll see him on the tapes and come looking for him. I doubt that. I would venture a guess that they'll find the facility, and that Harlan will give them a little insite as to what Kurt had done to them, worm that he is. Then they might put two and two together...well, just a theory. Well, I'm off to check out the sneak peek. Thanks for the Saturday chapter!
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Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 16:22 PDT
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Excellent chapter. I'm really hoping that Kurt;s suspicions that they'll come after him are correct. After all, if they catch up to him then they'll automatically know he's Sami's mate and she can see him again! GAH! I really want her to have him all to herself now. The suspense is killing me!!! Ah, well. Thanks for the Saturday chapter, it perked up my weekend :)
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 11:33 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG ponytail and gold earrings! Loved this chapter even if I almost cried through about half of it! Thank you Sue.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 10:59 PDT
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I knew that Kurt had grabbed the wrong bag when Belle had picked up the data cards! Oh man, poor Kurt! I hope him and Sami get some peace soon!
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Reviewed By: WolfPad [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 10:54 PDT
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Man, I'm glad that he let the scientists go, because if he didn't, Sam would've been upset, wouldn't she? As glad as I am that Kurt didn't go through with it, I still think that what he did to them wasn't enough. I hope that Kurt and Sam get to see each other soon, and I wonder what the family's reaction will be when they realize that he really is a Taijya (although maybe not anymore, eh?). Great chapter, as always, and I really look forward to reading the next one!
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Reviewed By: Pinkit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 10:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So that means that they can reach out to each other then? That is nice to know, even more that i doesn't have to be in dire circumstances like the day at the facility. So he didn't mean to give her the data cards? Does that mean he has her weapons too? I'm looking forward to a very sentimental re-encounter...
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 10:28 PDT
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Kurt could always just use Sam's cellphone and call one of her contact numbers... like her mother or father or grandfather lol I wonder if he will clue into that before they find him.
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 09:30 PDT
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Hmmm. Kurt's ok with dying for what he did to her. How sweet in a little morbid way. haha. I loved the Mikio/Sami scene it was sooo sweet. My uncle's like that sometimes and I love him to death too! Keep up the good work. I can't wait until Sami and Kurt re-connect!!!
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Reviewed By: kittycatkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 09:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Low pulled back ponytail, earings, the resemblance is cool- wait till Kagome and Inuyasha meet him. Mikio is so sweet - he would be a cute match for Meara's little sister? -hint hint....
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 08:40 PDT
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Great chapter! Update soon please and keep up the spectacular work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 08:18 PDT
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No wonder y she didn't call him...duh wrong bag kurt! I hope they are reunited soon. Kurt is like the badboy non pervert version of miroku. I luvd the mention of his two earrings and the ponytail at the base of his neck. I'll imagine that kagome and inuyasha will be surprised to meet him. lmao I don't think petersons penis will ever work properly again. Like everytime he goes to use it, it just goes limp from the memories lollllll. Serves him right. Sue I must say that you made my day with this impromptu chapter. I was absolutely delighted to see it in my email. Yay now I can enjoy my weekend again:-D you're so wonderful u kno that. Can't wait for the next!. When this story is completed I'm going to reread it from the beginning non-stop
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 22:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another dark chapter...
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 21:55 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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New chapter joy, hahah I laughed so hard at the pantsing. I can't wait to see what Kurt does next or what happens with the others find him.
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