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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 01:44 CDT
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when there's a change of subject, change of scene or change of speaker you should always make a new paragraph. you should always put at least two blank lines between each paragraph... when changing the setting or if time has passed you should separate those paragraphs with a line of something, examples: .:illi:. or ~~ or ][][ or ** or ~@~ etc. . . if you do that your story will be much easier to read and it will look prettier too. . . i'm so sorry but because of my dyslexia i am unable to read your story and i would love to.

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