| "Time Changes Everything" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Squall'sScar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm getting used to the nails on the chalkboard, so it's easier for me to read your work. This is GREAT!!! I can't wait to finish this!!! |
Reviewed By: Squall'sScar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!!!! I love it!!! I wish you could write as well as you think up these ideas! This story is worth the nails through the chalkboard writing!! LOL!!!! |
Reviewed By: rino_serenity On: July 18, 2002 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue. Did the pilots make it out in time? Will Quatre find about Usagi? I must know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What happpens next. Please hurry PLEASE PLEASE HURRY i must know what happened to the pilots and Usagi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Will OZ win this time?????????????????? |
Reviewed By: Squall'sScar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ouch! So many errors! But still the story is fantastic. Let's read on. |
Reviewed By: Squall'sScar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your spelling and grammer as well as your style are weak, but I loved the idea so much, I didn't care. The suspense was superb. I had to read every sentence instead of skimming through it. Work on your writing skills and your ideas will be a huge hit!!! I will read more, because your idea is truly captivating. |
Reviewed By: Amatsu_Otome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2002 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story. I hope that you get more out soon. I can't wait to find out what happens. Oh, by the way, thank you for your review on my story 'Missing Sibling.' I'm sorry, but I have to get a lot more reviews for those two in order to do that. If you want, you can get a lot of people to vote for them. It still stands as Quatre, but I will wait a few days before I write another chapter to give people a chance. |
Reviewed By: Crystal Child [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2002 20:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story. I can't wait to see more of it! Keep up the awsome job! |
Reviewed By: Flame_of_Ignacious [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2002 16:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey i like it! good start!!! ^_^ hope to say more of it very soon! |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2002 11:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I like the story! I can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^ Only one thing, you put the wrong chapter three up. I think it goes to one of your other stories. hehe |
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