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"The Unity Arc 01: The Rush" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ]
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 Reviewed By: WolfWing  On: February 25, 2011 21:22 EST
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Mmm...Wufei definitely has a very...eclectic collection of talents. Beautiful my dear!
 Reviewed By: WolfWing  On: February 20, 2011 09:17 EST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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SO excited to see an addition to this story line! Loved the addition of Wufei to the mix though he definitely gave the entire scene a different feel. Hard to know what his thoughts were on everything. Still, beautiful as always!
 Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 25, 2007 02:06 EST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Ah, Trowa and his self worth issues. I'm glad Quatre managed to get past them for the moment but I can't help but wonder what the morning after will bring. Such things are never so easily overcome, just pushed aside for deliciously droolworthy lime. No doubt Quatre is aware of this though. And I'll bet Trowa is going to be looking for the catch and waiting for the other shoe to drop and a bunch of other metaphors like that. As always, the chapter was lovely! Even more citrus flavored Christmas presents! I'm so happy! Fic-y pudding for all! Thank you for writing! As always, Your ecstatic fangirl, -jess
 Title: chs 5 & 6
Reviewed By: Lirilith [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2007 12:00 EST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Muwa-ha ha!!! I couldn't keep a straight face reading through Duo explaining things to Quatre! Absolutely great! Loved the idea of Christmas lights in 'Scythe's cockpit. Cute. Qat trying to tie Heero up for Duo was really sweet and quite funny. Heero and Duo cornering Qat in the forest showed how great they are together. Heero seems to be getting just as possessive as Duo. Their sex scene was as hot as usual and never boring! Now you just have to tell us what happenes between Trowa and his present...... Thanks for the wonderful Christmas present of lemony goodness!
 Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2007 04:15 EST
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poor Quatre.. ya'll have to write and let us know what Trowa does to him..ehhehe..awsome stories..
 Reviewed By: WolfWing  On: December 24, 2007 01:14 EST
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Happy Damn Christmas is right! Whooo-ee! Wish I had a present like that waiting for me! As always, LOVED it. Delightfully Gundam and sinfully sexy. God, Q is such a little devil! LOL
 Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: elementalmoon [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2007 00:06 EST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay! The boys(mminus wufei) now know...hehehe. I like how they found out/got caught themselves...Great job! Will more be forthcoming?
 Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 23, 2007 15:43 EST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Oh Yum! *checks herself for drool* The most delicious Christmas present ever! Thank you!!! Reassurance is an interesting way to put it. I'm kind of surprised Quatre had the nerve to try to tie Heero up. Turnabout *is* fair play, I must agree. And I'm sure Trowa will make good use of his gift! I'm not sure poor Quatre will ever be the same though. I was kinda wondering if Duo would ever get to be tied up, I'm glad he got to experience that delightful feeling. And it looks like Heero's got a bit of a possessive streak. heh. Good for him! Oh yum! Wonderful! Thank you very much for writing! I've still got that happy lemon grin on my face! As always, Your *very* happy fangirl, jess (who is off to do some last minute shopping! eep!)
 Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 20, 2007 18:47 EST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Mmm... The hotness returns. And it brought plot! Plot and lemon sandwiches, yum. My perverted fangirl brain pounced on this line: "What an interrogation method; secrets by sex. Kushrenada would have a field day." There's such a delicious image there. heh. And I think perhaps Duo may not be the only one losing his emotional detachment. Heero does seem awfully cuddly. Nor did he protest the freshening of his mark. I do wonder how he'll take Duo's answer. "Why?" is a most dangerous question after all. I do hope there'll be another bit so we might find out. Plot and steaming hot, slightly kinky lemon... what more could a fangirl ask for? Thank you for writing! Sincerely, Your happy puddle of fangirl goo, -sylenctone
 Title: For ch 4
Reviewed By: Lirilith [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 20, 2007 13:38 EST
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Oh, goody another chapter! As well written, funny and hot as the others. -And it seems a plot might be trying to sneak in. Better be careful or you'll have a real story on your hands instead of just some incredibly hot smex! I like how you switch between their call numbers, code names and actual names to show the differences in emotional closeness between them. Poor Heero and his clothes! I don't think he really stands a chance against Duo. Especially not when he seems to be giving in by starting to keep things in his pockets. I loved the line about Treiz having a new interrogation method! (Maybe in another chapter or story somewhere? I'm sure he and maybe Zechs wouldn't mind some attention. Nudge, nudge. Poke, poke) Thanks for making my day better with a new chapter between two of my favs!
 Reviewed By: Lirilith [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 18, 2007 17:25 EST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Excuse me, I have to finish wiping up the drool from my keyboard before I can get to the review. Ok, I think that may be a lost cause. Oh well. That was a really hot story! I'm so glad the insidious plot bunny bit you until you wrote more than just the first chapter. It was well written, with some cute humor sprinkled through it and the thoughts of both Duo and Heero were great! Duo's had me snickering and Heero's had me laughing outright. -and the sex! Did I mention the drool already? This one's going on my favorites. 'Cause I know I'll want to read it again. (and just in case that plot bunny decided to call in reinforcements and coerce you into more!)
 Reviewed By: SyciaraLynx [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 01, 2007 20:52 EST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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AWWWW. That ending was too cute for boots!
 Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 04, 2007 11:29 EST
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Damn! That was HOT! Hot and deliciously violent. I loved the ending and the "analyzing" mind of Heero. Now there's a tumultuous relationship. Heh. Thank you for writing! I hope there's more!
 Reviewed By: WolfWing  On: November 04, 2007 01:52 EDT
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Damn, talk about a helluva courtship. HOT scene...awesome twist of an ending. Love how the whole "computer mind" evaluation thing starts strong at the beginning, bogs down and completely shuts down in the middle (can picture a total Blue Screen Of Death when they finally get down to it) and afterwards is still locking up in reboot. :P I'm a computer nut...maybe that just seems cooler to me than most LOL
 Reviewed By: Oitaru [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 03, 2007 01:43 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Really yummy fic. Keep on writing!
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