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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2008 17:01 EDT
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Hmmm, interesting. Packfem? Heh. Okay, need to read more, update again soon, will ya? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 04:12 EDT
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PS. I'm glad you didn't make Q-ball a Camel
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Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 04:06 EDT
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LOL a boom box :D and CDs are getting old even now. I love it ^_^ ok so now I know what Du-chan, T'o-chan, and Q-ball are. I have hints to what Hee-chan is. So what is Wu-bear and will he show up more than his...*pulls out her GW info book (yes I have an official Japanese GW info book)* 31/49 eppie. times? And honestly I can't see Wu-bear being anything other than a lizard of some kind...or a Panda...but then again I'm not sure he'd be too happy being a Panda ^_^- and where did T'o go? Was he following Q-ball and Du-chan or did he go off on his own, I'm not sure I got that part T.T and if you're wondering I Cosplay as Du-chan so I tend to use his nicknames for the others just a lil bit :D
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Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 03:27 EDT
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HAZA!!!! i know what kind of animal Q-ball is :D now back to the story ^_^
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 13:11 EDT
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I somehow managed to miss the last chapter. Bad fangirl. So I'll just have to comment on both. :) I wasn't too sure before but I see that now everyone (except Wufei) seems to be on a first name basis. Though it seems like Trowa is the only one with the dubious honor of being labeled 'packmale' (though maybe it's the ears). heh. And I'm really enjoying the way you mostly follow the time-line whilst adding in all the fun bits in between. Though I doubt poor Heero is thanking you. heheehee. As for ch13, I think I'm getting a bit suspicious of Quatre too. This little slip: "We came to an eyâ€"a safehouse" sounds like 'eyrie' to me. Combine that with Duo's observation of "eyes sharp like a hawk" and I come up with some sort of Were-eagle or hawk. Hehee. Such fun. And I'm also glad Q is forcing Duo to let his body heal. Of course, Quatre's a pretty observant fellow and I'm sure he noticed the way Duo 'wolfed' his food down. I bet he already has his suspicions, particularly if he changes himself. I'm not quite sure what Heero or Wufei will be, but I'm sure they'll be just as fitting as the other three! You've thought this out really well. And I must add that I absolutely loved the 'grooming' scene! So cute! I wonder if Q will be elevated to Trowa's packmale status? hehee! Thanks for writing! Your verbose fangirl, -jess
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Reviewed By: KrystalFoxx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 04:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my! Another piece of artistry that's grabbed my attention. I'm extremely pleased with this and I'm delighted that you are continuing to update this on a fairly frequent basis. The development of the characters is coming along nicely although I'm a bit disappointed there hasn't been any further forays into the paranormal. Nice slip up done by Q. :D Just a little taste of what's to come? I'm fascinated by the thought of what the others personalities will manifest as and can't wait to see what more is in store. I wish you good plots and plenty of free time!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 22:44 EDT
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Heh, cool latest chapter, but I don't think any of the pilots could ever pass as normal. Trowa is probably some type of were, especially with the dog like way he follows Heero. Neh. Dunno about the others, but it would be cool to see em as somethign supernatural. Heh, 'Fei as a dragon would be pretty neat. Neh. Update again soon, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 15:18 EDT
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I'm kind of glad it was as long as it was 'cause I was able to finish it before my most hated class, but at the same time I want more. T.T Now here's another question, are all the pilots were-animals? Or are they humans with different powers? Also is it just a coincidence that the title Wild Wings is also a song from the soundtrack? Can't wait for the next update, Dark Princess
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 13:36 EDT
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Man, New Edwards really fucked things up. Neh, there's not much that can be done about it, to be honest. Neh. Of course, the other pilots are all gonna be affected by these upcoming battles and...whatever, I'm rambling. Just update again soon, and show that the other pilots might be werewolves, or bird things, or whatever. It'd be cool to see how they turn out, or if Duo's the only weird one. Neh. Update again soon, ja ne.
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Title: Awesome!!
Reviewed By: Lady Laori [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 13:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I sure am very interested in what is going to be happening next. Please don't delay with the next installment. I'll be waiting eagerly. Fantastic read.
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Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 08:31 EDT
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Evil thy name is tamiveldura. I'm all sitting here happy as can be that I found a fic with an author who keeps to original personalities, AND adds their own as needed, ...and it stops right at the New Edwards base T.T I remember the eppie for the New Edwards base. Well any way I was wondering if Hee-chan is a wolfie to and if so, has he subconsciously made Duo alpha to him. I ask cause he wouldn't go back into the house until Duo came to invite him in. I know that can be explained away as stubbornness but I don't see Hee-chan giving up what could help him in a Mission just cause lil' Du-chan yelled at him ^_^ ...blast this mean I have to get back to my Math now *cries*
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 07:22 EDT
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Oh this is so much fun! I've had a few suspicions about the others having similar 'issues' but seeing tiger ears on Trowa is just fun! I guess Trowa's managed to earn his trust too, since he's calling him 'packmale' even though he still doesn't know his name. At least I think he doesn't. And I wonder if Heero will get the title of Alpha? I can't wait to see your version of New Edwards. And to see how and when Duo's suspicions about Trowa are proved or disproved. I wonder if he'll be seeing ears on the others too. Distraction like that could be very very bad at the wrong time. Oh I just can't wait! Thank you for writing! --jess
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 13:55 EDT
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Heero was just about as pissed as I expected. And what a lovely row it was! I still kind of wonder just what exactly happened with the warhead. It certainly got Heero's panties in a twist, whatever it was. What I didn't expect was for Duo to own up to his surprise that Trowa got him out of there and that he wouldn't have done the same. It still amuses me that 'safehouse' still equals 'den' in his head and he's stopped trying to fight it. It will be interesting to see how the relationship between Trowa and Duo grows and changes. They've certainly come a long way from Duo thinking he was Scary! And I can't blame Duo one bit for not trusting the good doctors. There is something very fishy going on here. Thanks for writing! --jess
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 05:36 EDT
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Indeed. Heh. Keep updating, this weird were-wolf bird thingie story rocks. So, update some more, will ya? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 00:50 EDT
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thank u for updating so fast!!! WOW...really I do like your interpretation because it seems so legit. please keep up the good work.
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