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Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 08:31 EDT
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Evil thy name is tamiveldura. I'm all sitting here happy as can be that I found a fic with an author who keeps to original personalities, AND adds their own as needed, ...and it stops right at the New Edwards base T.T I remember the eppie for the New Edwards base. Well any way I was wondering if Hee-chan is a wolfie to and if so, has he subconsciously made Duo alpha to him. I ask cause he wouldn't go back into the house until Duo came to invite him in. I know that can be explained away as stubbornness but I don't see Hee-chan giving up what could help him in a Mission just cause lil' Du-chan yelled at him ^_^ ...blast this mean I have to get back to my Math now *cries*
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 07:22 EDT
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Oh this is so much fun! I've had a few suspicions about the others having similar 'issues' but seeing tiger ears on Trowa is just fun! I guess Trowa's managed to earn his trust too, since he's calling him 'packmale' even though he still doesn't know his name. At least I think he doesn't. And I wonder if Heero will get the title of Alpha? I can't wait to see your version of New Edwards. And to see how and when Duo's suspicions about Trowa are proved or disproved. I wonder if he'll be seeing ears on the others too. Distraction like that could be very very bad at the wrong time. Oh I just can't wait! Thank you for writing! --jess
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 13:55 EDT
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Heero was just about as pissed as I expected. And what a lovely row it was! I still kind of wonder just what exactly happened with the warhead. It certainly got Heero's panties in a twist, whatever it was. What I didn't expect was for Duo to own up to his surprise that Trowa got him out of there and that he wouldn't have done the same. It still amuses me that 'safehouse' still equals 'den' in his head and he's stopped trying to fight it. It will be interesting to see how the relationship between Trowa and Duo grows and changes. They've certainly come a long way from Duo thinking he was Scary! And I can't blame Duo one bit for not trusting the good doctors. There is something very fishy going on here. Thanks for writing! --jess
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 05:36 EDT
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Indeed. Heh. Keep updating, this weird were-wolf bird thingie story rocks. So, update some more, will ya? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 00:50 EDT
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thank u for updating so fast!!! WOW...really I do like your interpretation because it seems so legit. please keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 22:12 EDT
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Duo's reaction to Trowa was priceless! And I just knew he'd get himself into some kind of mess for hiding Scythe in the river. I find it supremely amusing that Trowa went from 'Really scary, don't want to meet that guy!' to 'damn I owe him big for saving my butt three times' in Duo's head in the span of about five minutes. Gotta love re-evaluated first impressions. I can only imagine the dressing down dear Duo will be getting from 01! Not only did he leave his suit in the wrong place, but I'm sure that was his cranky warhead that blew seven minutes too soon. Such fun! Thank you for writing! I'll be looking forward to your next update! -jess
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Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 20:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad you updated - an interesting combination fic - the "usual" and the "unusual"... I like the fact that the pilots are more independent thinkers.
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Title: ch8
Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 14:58 EDT
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Hmm... I can't help but worry about the slight change Duo made to the plans. Particularly since he doesn't know what exactly Heero is going to be doing. I also worry a bit about the warhead he gave Heero. Not that I don't think he can handle it but more that it will do something particularly awkward at an inopportune time. It was rather clever of Duo to wrap those nasty bits of shrapnel up with his other bombs. I can't wait to see what happens next! I have this sneaking suspicion that something is going to go horribly pear-shaped and soon. Thanks for writing! --jess
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 16:53 EST
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Sweet. Definitely a fun start to mission mode again. Neh. COntinue to update, this style works very well for this story. Ja ne.
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Title: chap7
Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 14:22 EST
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Well Duo seems to be taking all of this in stride. I loved his little 'conversation' with G's recording. It seems the good doc knows Duo pretty well, heh. Though it is interesting that his intel isn't perfect and that he didn't know Duo had met Heero. Interesting indeed. I laughed when Duo stole the music player. His quest for tunes seems to be a running theme. Duo always did strike me as the kind of guy who has his very own soundtrack to life. And it was clever of him to get fuel and explosives in the same trip. I rather liked that scene. I suppose I'll have to wait and see how the three of them work together and to see whether Duo will still be creeped out by Trowa in person. heh. Thank you for writing! As always, your curious fangirl, jess
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 07:46 EST
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Well now this is interesting. I wonder if he'll be able to get in contact with G and figure out how to ask him about this lovely new development. I also wonder if his research about wolves will come in handy a little later. Well I'll be watching for more. Thanks for writing! --jess
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 18:37 EST
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Hmmm, fun little chapter. It establishes some more complexity, but basically acts as a filler chapter, almost, establishing a rapore between quatre and duo. Neh. Not a bad idea, and execution is okay to boot. Neh. Update again soon, rapid chapters mean more reviews from me, ja ne.
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Title: Very Good!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 17:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapt! Very interesting
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Reviewed By: elementalmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 01:20 EST
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You're cranking this one out and it just got really interesting. I was wondering when the others would show up and the meeting didn't disappoint! Great job! I can't wait to see more!
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Title: Awesome!!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 20:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! The other pilots finally appeared! Very good chapt.!
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