| "A New Vessel" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Fireheart125 On: September 04, 2008 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is an AWESOME fanfic it is very, VERY GOOD and original~!! Please update soon~ :D
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Title: :3
Reviewed By: Anaujiram On: June 07, 2008 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mhmhmmmm... very nice. You have me purring like a kitten.
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Reviewed By: icantbeliveitachiisreallyded!!!! On: June 05, 2008 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this! I'm not sure whether the angel-story is related to another series or you just created it yourself? Either way, you've really made it work with the naruto characters. :) Keep writing! You're characters are so perfect! Esp. Sasuke, he makes me lol. 8DDDDD I'm excited about Hinata's little speech.... Shino and Kiba? Interesting...... I'm also eager to know what's going on with Kakashi, esp. KYUBI.... muahhhhahaha. Can't wait! :DDDDDDDD!!
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Reviewed By: ANGELBOY613 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the originality and the concept. I was following and enjoying the story up until this chapter. It seems overkill that Naruto would beg his boss for a week off and hide from all his friends except for Neji and Hinata. You didn't indicate earlier in the story that Naruto and Neji shared a friendship above his other friends-that he would impose himself on Neji the way he did. We knew that Sasuke and Neji and Gaara all knew and shared the reincarnation experience with each other. Naruto shared this with nobody but Sasuke. He shared the dreams with Sakura and Ino but only let them believe it was dreams_he didn't want his friends to think he was crazy by telling them he was inhabited by the spirit of a angel from a past life. I also realized there's a difference between past lives and soul possession. A person only has one soul_that soul may be reincarnated and have past lives; but it wouldn't be 2 souls_A person could have the memories of his past life; but there's only 1 soul. So if they're reincarnated like you write, there's only 1 soul. If there's 2 souls struggling for dominance-which you also indicate; that's possession. You wrote that Sasuke was hoping their past live's spirits would pass on if he let them have sex and complete their unfinished business--that's like ghosts. So I'm really confused on what exactly is going on in regards to that part of the story.
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Reviewed By: BloodRedMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 19:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon you are doing a great job i love your story ^^
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Reviewed By: SyciaraLynx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter! I'm glad they settled some things between them. I definitly laughed at Naruto's venting at Hinata. Great job, and I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: ._. On: January 09, 2008 23:54 CST
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Here I am wondering why there arent pages of reviews
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Reviewed By: xstargirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 03:01 CST
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oh my gosh i love it. naruto and sasuke are already angels. =] please update soon. GREAT STORY
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Reviewed By: SyciaraLynx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this has got to be the most original fanfic i've ever read! Awesomme job! I can't wait to read more!
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Title: OMG AWESOME!
Reviewed By: SuChAbAKa On: October 26, 2007 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is incredibly original, and I loved to read it. I've never read anything like it and I'm glad I came to this site today. I cant wait for an update, I will be checking for one very often. I rated them this way because it is truly an excellent fanfiction. Though I wish the chapters were a bit longer, I love the fanfic nonetheless. Thank you for letting me read!
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