| "Shippo's First Rut" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: mew_lucy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fan fiction very much! I alway wondered what would happen to Shippo when he got old enough and went into rut! Please keep writing.
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2007 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww poor Shippo. I wonder who he is going to come across in the forest. Please update soon
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Title: i like
Reviewed By: codac [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 02:34 CST
Comment/Review:
i think he should be with a human thats how i allways amagend it but i like the story anyway ubdate soon
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far so good. I wont be able to say more unless I see another chapter. But overall I cant wait to see what happens to Shippou and who he meets if he meets anyone. Great chapter!
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Title: So many questions...
Reviewed By: Roxotaku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 13:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi Nick, I would email you about your questions but you are not a member obviously because you are not logged in. This is a continuation of "Can't Get Enough," but the story is not about Inu and Kags, although this is the same Inu and Kags from the previous story. Yes, they have a another child, a four year old son named Ichiro. There will be an OC character, but ultimately Shippo will be with one of Takahashi's characters. As for the rest of your questions, read and see because my muse has not filled me in on them yet... ;)
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Reviewed By: Nick F. On: October 29, 2007 11:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool! Is this the continuation of your other story Can't get enough? Well, if Shippou was 5 or 6 when they first met then Kagome would only be like 26-27 and Inuyasha a couple of years older--definitely in their sexual prime still. Poor Shippou--having younger sisters suck during your teenage years that's for sure. Well, I would love to read more: did Kagome decided to stay in the Sengoku Jidai with Inuyasha? Is the well still open? What do they do for a living? Is Michiko their only child? And most important--who will be the object of Shippou's affection? I'm not big on OC but if that's necessary then what will be will be.
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