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Title: Chapter 20
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another terrific chapter. I love how the characters stay in their personality even though its a different story. My favorite part of this chapter was when Kagome was holding Inuyasha on the motorcycle. How she holds him tighter and he squeezed her hand to reassure her. How romantic. I can't wait to see what Inuyasha does to Kouga. :D Thanks so much for the update.
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I really enjoyed reading this. I can't wait to read more. Please write more as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 21:28 CST
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This is so freaking KAWAII!!! I enjoyed the story a lot and the descriptions and conversations seem very much real. This is a great work of art! I love it!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 05:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... kagome is getting confused... both mentally and emotionally... hope everything works out in the end... and that kagome should just take it one day at a time... and inuyasha should stop being weak when it involves kikyo... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 02:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i understand ScifiAmy ^^ its like a movie :P but i was feeling warm and fuzzy at the end :P Kagome in Inuyasha's arms.. he not able to control his feelings... its sooo GREAT!!!
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again im praising you. Ur an awsome writer can't wait for the next update
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Title: STUPENDIOUS
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, WOW, WOW! This chapter was awesome. I just loved the termoil going through Inu and Kags. The end of the chapter was the best. How she spoke in her sleep and said his name. He's got to know that she has feelings for him now right? Then Inuyasha can be dense (as all males are) LOL! Have I mentioned that it feels like I'm watching a movie in my mind? If not, then this is a 5 star movie. I highly recommend everyone "watch" this movie. It's terrific!!! Keep up the tremendous awesome work and I will keep on reading and reviewing. YOU ROCK!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg!!! This fanfiction is like the best Eva!!! Wow, I wonder if Kagome and Inuyasha will get to the Demon relm soon? Oh, i'll be checking up to find out!!!! Please keep updating!!! !!!!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 22:50 CST
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hey i think i've met some of the guys in the band! or people who act just like them. . . i like the subtle softened glance at her, he's going to be a hard nut to crack, but isn't he always? . . . a little sango and kagome bonding, one can always use another woman's advise and support. ~ always a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: Hollywood1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like how you made the Shikon no Tama into a Formula then the jewel!!. It's funny how you make Inuyasha react when he's jealous lol. Well update soon love the story =3
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Reviewed By: fanfic reader On: December 13, 2007 14:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great plot! Couple of grammar errors but that is fine. Enjoyed the storyline. I am curious as to when are things between inuyasha and kagome going to heat up? Or is it just going to be those type of romance where they like each other but are afraid to admit it and always get those jealous and over protected attitude towards each other, like the anime series. I would be interesting to have their relationship develop more. Looking forward to the next update! ^_^
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Reviewed By: I'm Inulover1253 On: December 13, 2007 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg i abousolutly love you. U r the best writer ever
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Title: Terrific
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 11:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice Chapter. I loved the reactions the band members gave Kagome. Your descriptions are fantastic. The story is coming along wonderfully and you update so frequently it is awesome! I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. I can't wait to read more. It's like a book you get that is so superb and you can't put it down until you read it completely. YOU ROCK!!!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 11:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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good update... liked how the band members talked about kagome while she was still in the room... kinda funny... and the inuyasha just blows up at them... nice that kagome & sango have some time to talk... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 16:55 CST
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boy, it's not like kouga claimed she was his woman or anything =/ . . . miroku is finding uses for his kazaana, kagome is more than they'd ever suspected and yash is jealous because of kagome's innate kindness toward everyone indiscriminately, something he'll just have to get used to, ne? i always like the 'act jealous but deny it to his last breath' yasha, it's so transparent. . . can't wait for more! ~ ginny
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