"This Wasn't In The Job Description" Reviews/Comments [ 332 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 09:51 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: nice update... what did happen... and where did kikyo disappear to... kagome has a lot of questions but no answers yet... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not log in) On: November 12, 2007 02:03 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: oooo me loving it ^^
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 02:03 CST Comment/Review: i am assuming that there are youkai in this world. is it known that they exist or are they considered myths or legends and they live concealed like some secret society? then again she wasn't too surprised that yash was hanyou... . . . so kikyo is a tough and cold broad who fights evil naraku minions, not a bad guy but not a nice person either. . . both chapters were informative, shaping the characters and the world they live in, like the dawn, one can only see shapes in varying shades of gray and black and as the sun rises things become clearer, sharper, focused and in full color. and eloquently executed. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: I'm Inulover1253 On: November 10, 2007 22:51 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG I love it
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 20:14 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: nice chapter... at least kagome is starting to adjust a bit... and she's getting along a bit with inuyasha... don't really like kikyo... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: My name is Inulover18951 On: November 10, 2007 12:10 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Good job u've got me hooked
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Reviewed By: Christyne On: November 08, 2007 15:08 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I LOVE YOU KEEP GOING THIS WAS AN AWESOME CHAPTER = ) Hope to read more soon By the way im not signed in My name is Inulover1253
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 12:47 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: nice update... really sweet... a little bonding between inuyasha & kagome... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 12:26 CST Comment/Review: Please update soon!!!!! *eagerly awaits new chapter*
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 12:11 CST Comment/Review: she's got a gig tonight so i won't ask her now but she is a bit of a 'yasha freak and she just may do it for fun if it's okay with you, i'll recommend your story to her to read though. more sample music to listen to, cathasaigh [dot] com/unreleased [dot] php
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 12:00 CST Comment/Review: nice lyrics, you gotta set them to music and put it up on youtube! . . . anyway as usual good chapter, touching and sad. ~ thank you, ginny p.s. i have a friend but she's using the winter to record a new cd. check " myspace [dot] com/cathasaighmusic " if you think she's good enough i'll ask her, all she can do is say no.
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 07:20 CST Comment/Review: Well I read the first chapter then I came back to review and there were two more chapters. It's so rare to get nice suprises these days. I think I have a better feel for your story now (just a little). I think your spin on the characters might be interesting. I can certainly relate to Kagome about the loans & job thing. (Always nice to have a touch of reality in fan fictions.) And I really liked the way she didn't punch Miroku for grabbing her. Women empowerment is strongly encouraged everywhere but hitting a powerful, rich man that probably has some say in whether you keep your job is never a good idea. Thank you for not stereo-typing the moment. Of course someone of your experience (in writing and life) I suppose it's not such a shock that you have a good style of writing. The little things you did to desribe Miroku's office was nice. The expensive vibe along with all the giggly girls was a fantastic combo. Exactly what I expect it to be. I would like to say something about Sango but I suppose I'll have to see more of her before I can properly comment. Thank you for bringing up the fact that Kaede can't clean the house all by herself. Because my mind was rapidly trying to process how she cleans such a vast manor, goes shopping, AND cooks. (Shoot, can I have one of her for Christmas?) Then you stated how this miricale occured. (I want answers about all those secret smiles Kagome is getting but since the POV is limited I guess my questions won't be answered any time soon?) Inuyasha seems pretty good. He is trying to adjust to someone living in his house after making it a fortress. Why wouldn't he be a bit touchy? I look forward to seeing how you make him relax around Kagome. I loved the song you gave Inuyasha. Did you make it up or is it something you found? The way you said that it was sung in a sad tone verse the "orginal" version on the album...well I could imagine it both ways. What a day poor Kagome has had. First she has to ride the train all day (in heels!). Then she has her boss' agent grope her. Let's not forget Inuyasha yelling at her for tidying is office, after staring at her (probably thinking how she looked like Kikyo...). To top it all off she can't sleep, which leads to her hearing a touching song and ends with her getting yelled at again. The fact that he has ears she can't pet should be added to the pro side of the day. If she didn't quit after all the rest of that crap why would his heratige matter? But I'm assuming he has a complex over this matter, yes? Speaking of ending the day; nice way to end the chapter. Of course most readers will whine but it was actually very brilliant on your part. I can't wait to see what you do with this. Sorry for the mistakes in here, I know there are some. One day maybe I will become a grammar goddess.
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Reviewed By: FicFan7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 16:49 CST Comment/Review: hey so yeah, im really impressed so far with your fic. the story line is great, although the whole inu yasha being a rock star thing is a little common, you are definitly doing it with a different and very unique aproach that is quite original. anyway, great quality work with original approach makes for a great fic, i look forward to reading more! ;D
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 05:06 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: yea do something with thoes ears of his XD and it would have been funny to hear Inuyasha sing XD
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 05:06 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG I LOVE YOU KEEP GOING
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